ozeegrassman said:

Also, not sure if this is your style, but lemme know whatchu think of my new music vidya would ya? – http://www.youtube.com/watch?v…..pxiQ2AbI1s

well I wasnt feeln that Hwangma at all, maybe if he spit some bars instead of just the hook

and when he DID spit the hook it was over dubbed so hard to hear.

As far as you, your lyrics were clever and you had a nice flow, your delivery could be better as far as energy, Id give this a 6.5  outta 10 or maybe a 7

Decent shit, I see you got a 1,000+ views already so nice work.

I need to get a video going soon myself, so you can criticize my shit haha

ozeegrassman said:

Loll yeah the thing about Hwangma, is it was his first time writing in English, he normally spits in Korean.

He did me a favor cuz i can't write hooks well, so he came through to help out.

And ill definitely consider the energy factor on my next recorded track.

Thanks for the feedback man, and definitely do up a vid! I find its more immersive as a vid.

oh ok..

and yeah, I had a video but had legal trouble with copy right stuff

bbj25 said:

Dope track bra! Vocals sound real dope especially how everything blended together as well as far as vocals and beat.

check this out when you get the chance. Hope you enjoy!!

http://bit.ly/HsISem

yo the hook was hype for sure, I think you should take the breaths out of your vocals completely though

as far as the bars it was a funny little story or what not, I wouldnt be too into it after a few more listens though, but the Hook was Super chill man.

Good sound for sure keep at it man!

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Yo!