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10:37 am
March 30, 2012
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yungd95
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havent posted anything for feed in awhile. i been working on getting myself better but here is a track i did havent had time to finish so if anyone wants to hit it up lemme know. Also if you leave feedback ill return it leave a link. This is unmixed still so keep that in mind.
http://www.divshare.com/downlo…..883897-0a6
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11:01 am
March 31, 2012
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moespitsick
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lyrics was good. i think u gotta work on your flow and delivery. keep it up
http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..mp;ret=all
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Light It Up coming soon!!!
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10:24 am
April 2, 2012
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yungd95
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Bump someone has to be interested in this track
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3:32 pm
April 3, 2012
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Kalamity
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Hmm i enjoyed this some, You still need work, but good job, work on your flow and pronounciation.
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11:14 pm
April 3, 2012
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KayR
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Not a fan of Marka hooks generally.
Your flow needs some more structure, it seems like to fall off beat a lot.
The delivery could be touched up quite a lot. Try memorizing your lines before spitting them. The mix is a little harsh sounding too.
Lyrics aren't to bad, just the rhyme scheme is awkward so it creates some odd verses.
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agree with whats been said but since no one is hoping on this i might as well, i'll have it by next week
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2:46 pm
April 5, 2012
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yungd95
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4:35 pm
April 5, 2012
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Tommie D
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i did a version to this song
here it is : http://www.divshare.com/downlo…..327094-25f
check it out
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11:30 pm
April 5, 2012
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onestophiphop
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im debating on gettin on this, not sure if i will yet, cant dl anything right now, takes along time just to listen to stuff, im not huge on marka hooks like KayR Said but i think i can get down on this
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KayR said:
Not a fan of Marka hooks generally.
Your flow needs some more structure, it seems like to fall off beat a lot.
The delivery could be touched up quite a lot. Try memorizing your lines before spitting them. The mix is a little harsh sounding too.
Lyrics aren't to bad, just the rhyme scheme is awkward so it creates some odd verses.
i agree with basically everything except i am a fan of marka's hook . it sounds like this verse doesn't fit this song . just the way you delivered it . like marka's hook had a whole different mood & vibe & then you just completely changed that vibe . work on that , try to make your verse come off of the hook smoothly . touch up all the things kayr said , also . i can't wait to hear the finished project !
return the feedback please ? http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..trippy-day
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