Post edited 7:18 am - March 25, 2012 by ryze78

http://soundcloud.com/ryan-r-r…..-ryan-reed

Had these lyrics for awhile and used this beat.

moespitsick said:

cool song. good lyrics and nice flow. keep it up

http://www.reverbnation.com/moedesto

Damn dude,I think you might just be the best I've heard on shadow so far,I'm new but have listend to quite a few artist.Your shit is right on point,nice delivery and quality.You might have to give a few pointers on production.I would have gave you feedback but I have to sign in an shit for that link.

Thanks again.

moespitsick said:

good looking man i appreciate that. and far as pointers. 1 the music gotta be in you already. not something u wanna do cause its cool to do. 2 ive been rapping almost ten years. so it does take time and practice. 3 the more u write and record the more your mind is gonna open up musically. u get what u put in. 4 do it for the love not the money. when u truly do something u love the money will come. 5 always keep open ears and a open mind to good or bad criticism.  not sure if thats the pointers u looking for cause u asked for pointers in production but i dont produce or engineer my tracks. i just write and rap. so the above is just how i got to where im at musically. hope that helps. peace

No,I ment tips on engineer ,I been rapping since I was a kid which would be about 20 years I been writing,I'm 33 yrs old.Your style is nice,but I ment more along the lines of the quailty.I'm trying to record myself,Though I been writing forever,I haven't produced/engineered very much.Thanks man..

Thanks for telling me my quailty was on point man..My moniter speakers broke and all I'm using is a cheap pair of shure headphones to moniter the sound levels.Plus i'm a newb at engineering songs.Although I'm getting better,the quaility still isn't where I want it to be in comparision to other artist work.Also I haven't really found the perfect effects for my stlye of voice.I think I have sort-of a lloyd Banks/Fabulous,deep/plain voice.

Jonny Rod said:

This is pretty sick. Flow's dope. Lyrics are great. Quality is as well. Whatever effect you used here seems to work pretty well for your voice. I wouldn't say you have a Lloyd Banks/Fab type voice though. Their voices are more monotone and sometimes its hard to hear any feeling in there. With you, not so much, the inflections in your voice are very clear.

http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..d-returned

That is what I wanted to hear man,Thanks for this..I always thought my voice was kinda blah and monotone,but that's just my ears ya know?

will return feed in a few minutes..