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Whole Clip (Atomic Beats) Collab
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8:54 am
June 17, 2012


smoke342

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Posts: 981
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Yo what up.  I got this track open 2nd verse and 2nd hook if anyone wants to try to hit it up.

Its cool if any of you haters want do try to drop a diss on the 2nd too do it up.



ComScore


“Its like God damn yo I leave your f/ing mans

In the gutter with his m/fing plans

With his Hands…all sliced up

Why the f**k would you even fight tuck”

https://soundcloud.com/smoke342/fuk-wit-me
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8:19 pm
June 17, 2012


KayR

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Posts: 4109

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The lyrics are a little basic here, and the delivery/mixing could use some work. The mixing is especially messy sounding with these dubs, they need to be quieter. The flow is slippy and could use more practice. The lyrics seem to be something that doesn't match the beat that well, unless that was the point haha. It's not to bad of an idea, though I'm not loving it.

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12:55 am
June 18, 2012


smoke342

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 981
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Thanks man I appreciate you taking the time to listen.

I am gonna focus on mixing when I have people listen to my stuff.  Maybe mix a track 3-5 times before releasing or something.


This verse is a freestyle and the hook is from another track.


Best Regards

https://soundcloud.com/smoke342/fuk-wit-me
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