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6:45 pm
June 4, 2012
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-young o-
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http://www.divshare.com/downlo…..190551-bcb
Im still kinda new to this site so i would appreciate some feed and i will do the same for you.Tell me what i need to work on,this is the first full track i made..well kinda.Need someone to hop on this and kill this shit!!
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2:21 pm
June 5, 2012
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-young o-
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2:41 pm
June 5, 2012
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WarLock
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| Posts: 277 Ringgold, GA |
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The audio quality is decent, some of the overdubs are a little bit off but thats an easily fixed problems. A big issue is the flow. For example, on the first verse, a lot of the llines sound like you tried to force syllables into it. Also on the chorus where you say “Hit it hit it” on the second repitition it sounds a bit mumbled and hard to hear. I would work on the grammar a bit too though I'm guessing English isn't your first language?
RTF? http://www.shadowville.com/boa…..k-returned
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“Lyricism is an art. Not just a bunch of words that rhyme.” Trip 6
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1:03 pm
June 6, 2012
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-young o-
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Preciate the feed WarLock.Ill take all that into consideration on the next track,and no english isn't my first laguage its spanish.Ill take a listen to your track here in a bit, good looking out though.
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