Never intended on startin shit but get rewarded like this//
Tech and Choppaz aimin at em? nonsense and this is irrelevant shit//
It takes a real man to grow up and apoligize//
but i’ve been talked down on so much that yall done failed to realize//
That i’m talented, disregard the fact im young//
but my love for this site and rap game left a lil nigga sprung//
n rap…hataz cant break us up im immuned to u//
deeply immersed inside drenched and up to my neck in u//
However back to the topic shadowville i love this th’a'ng//
this sites a path of freedom, an escape from reality…possibly to express my pain//
Shouts out to Zinn and Strife “shoot em up” big ups dawgs//
and Nifty im impressed i strive to be acknowledge and looked up 2 like u dawg//
Shadow you prolly hate me but fuck it… i thank u//
For your construcive critsism n Barker i even thank u 2//
u planted a seed in me to grow and form in 2 a better artist//
I know u dispise me but oh well im sorry//
Not apoligizin 2 u… that was just cause i couldnt find a rhyme//
but 2 everybody on shadowville heres my only once stated one time i apoligize//
Makes no sense 2 u, but hella sense to me//
believe it or not this site drove me 2 b a scholar in thing//
so critic instead of critizise(??) and help b4 hurt me//
like it or not yall drew the blueprint for my undying journey//
and development into more dominant emcee//
and helpin me feel immortal when layin a verse to a beat//
So if u doubted me i thank u cuz it only made me stronga’//
u added fuel to my fire so this stubborn mutha fucka can keep makin traxx longa//
lyrixx flow from my mind as they break free from my mouth//
critic this verse for me please and tha’ll greatly help me out//
n i thank yall for everything… jus a quick verse that i typed as i thought of it… if it makes no sense to u…oh well yall do yall shit and ummm could yall grade this as if this were a battle
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whether your willing or not…plz do it…it will greatly help me
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