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5:44 pm November 19, 2009
| RiCH
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Yo Need sum feedback… If you leave Feedback I'll Check Out Your Stuff Too…
Check Out My Rhymes at
http://www.soundclick.com/band…..ID=1008028
Just tell Me The Good, The Bad, And The Awesome
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5:54 pm November 19, 2009
| Infectious Of Uprize Legacy
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sup man. i like your stuff. im still a newb on here too but from what i heard, need to work on your delivery a lil bit. it sounds like you are kinda tryin to force some things. i like your rhymes, they work well together for the most part but again try to smooth things out a bit.
check out some of my stuff. Ignore the quality on “we came to party”, i know it sucks but i think the flow is good and then on fear me, my part is the first part of the 2nd verse and the whole 3rd verse and i put the fx on to make me sound sorta demonic. let me know what you think
http://www.myspace.com/infectious208
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5:58 pm November 19, 2009
| RiCH
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Yeah I heard That… Most da people Like Sippin On hennessey… And Everyday Life.. Most The Others I was Either High Or Tippin When I Recorded Dem Lol… But “Fear Me Wuz Banging”… Day in the life wuz cool except for the quality.. Maybe the mic? maybe able to tweak that up.. but that demonic s**t was Tight too though… Felt hella trippy
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6:12 pm November 19, 2009
| STRiFEDiViNE
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Your not bad man.. You have a nice flow and decent delivery.. But like what was said before your rhymes are kind of basic.. You should really try and use more multisyllabalic rhymes instead of one syllabal rhymes.. It makes the flow sound better and the rhymes can be alot more creative.. You definatly have potential though man.. Keep working and you can only get better!
http://www.soundclick.com/strifedivine
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6:21 pm November 19, 2009
| Kalamiti
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Meh, not bad, wasnt impressed either though, to be honest i dont like that style of rap so… for the most part. And yeah as they said, work of delivery, and the rhymes a bit.
Keep it up!
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www.youtube.com/KalamitiMusic , www.myspace.com/Kalamitimusic , www.twitter.com/KalamitiMusic
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8:12 pm November 19, 2009
| RiCH
Shadowvillian
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Aiight Thanks Ya'll… Yea i Jus Started So I Gots Sum Time…Strife Divine Your Raps Is tight Too I Was Diggin Tormented
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8:38 pm November 19, 2009
| Josh Taylor
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your straight man, definitely on your way.
everything everyone up there says hits in on the head.
i like your stuff though.
just click on my name to hit me back with feed.
peace!
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