not bad not bad.you need to work on the hook though,singing on it sucks.

Defintely tell you from TX, lol. Got the H.A.W.K. accent n everything. I liked it, flow could be a lil more practiced on, lyrics were there though. Delieveries a key to the emotion of ur listeners ears, so practice on that a bit. Other then that, -thumbs up.

Oh yea. On the hook with the singin, to make shit sound more tuned n leveled, try n do triple or quadruple voice overs on it, n lower em into a choir type atmosphere kind of. Reverb wouldnt hurt on the hook neither.

poop (havent listened yet, just woke up)

i got 2 things to say

1) myspace fuckin quality reduce sucks ASS
2) SICK

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