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I Need Feed Back From Any One And Every One!!!

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12:48 am
August 23, 2009


Texas Made

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1119

1

I need Honest Feed Back!

Tell Me What You think. Its Not my Best Material, but Its Pretty Good i Guess.

I Had Wrote This To Tell A Little Bout Me. I Do Not Have A Mic, But I Do Write Verses And Songs.

Im The Realist Vato On these mutha Fuckin Streets

And You Know What i Say Is A Fuckin Gurantee

I New Since Day One It Was Destined For Me

To Come Up In the Rap Game Like A Fuckin Prodigy

Im The Realist On The Mic And Im The Realist In Sight

Theres No Wonderin Why I Set A New Hieght

I Tell You How It Is And I Tell You How It Do

Im The Only One You Know Who Keeps this Shit True

You Know What It Is I Do It All For you

I Do It For My Family And I Do It For My Friends

And Im Keepin This Shit True Till The Very End

Look Into My Eyes And Nigga Tell Me What You See

What You See Is The Hatred Greed And Jealusy

Dont Be Surprised Cus Its just Reality

Its The Reflection Of You because Its Not What I Be

Its The S To The B To The Mutha Fuckin 3 ——- (those Are My Initials)

i dont give a fuck about u cuz u aint meee…


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12:51 am
August 23, 2009


TheKing

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 808

2

u have a 3 in ur initial LMAO lol jk dude dope s**t bruh :) not the best ive seen on here but potential is there

TXT BATTLE (11-1) I need something to end the bad, or steer me clear from here the edge/ so i have a pen and pad, its either that or the nearest ledge

12:54 am
August 23, 2009


Texas Made

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1119

3

Haha Yea I Actually Do My Name Is-

Sammy Bernal 3rd (SB3)

i dont give a fuck about u cuz u aint meee…

2:21 am
August 23, 2009


Texas Made

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1119

4

Need More Feed Back!

i dont give a fuck about u cuz u aint meee…

8:48 am
August 23, 2009


Stijn Govaerts/Sti-G

Veteran

Posts: 353

5

It doesn't really have a concept, and I don't like that… Other than that, it's quite good… Keep practising