These isn't my usual bag. I don't mind the dark screaming in the second half of the bars on the first part but the chanty-sort of yelling is a bit iffy.
Your lyrics are on point. I wish your delivery was less at 90% the whole time with the occasional throw into 100. I think it should be more varied. It gets slightly better during the other verses (the first verse is the most abrasive).
I don't like the way the verses go into the hook. I like the instrumentation that comes in near the end. If the whole song had some more production on it like this it might improve.
Experimental, for sure. Keep pushing boundries.
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