Listened to the top 2 tracks on your myspace.
The first one I couldn't really understand what you were saying for the most part. The vocals seem to just blur into the beat or into themselves idk..
The second one sounded a little better, but I feel like it sounded the same as the first one in that the vocals don't have enough emotion. They sound like the same song on different beats basically because of that.
Think you got some potential, just work on the emotion thing and mixing.