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Please Critique My Freestyles
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1:00 pm
May 17, 2012


i_amryan

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Yo yo, I'm trying to improve my freestyling. If you guys have any tips, hate, praise, etc… Hook me up. Whatever you think about it, I want to know. Regarding my lyrics, delivery etc. Please and thank you.


Give me a few moments. I'm going to combine like 2-3 in a YouTube vid and post it. 

You can only succeed.
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2:55 pm
May 17, 2012


i_amryan

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Posts: 110
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aright, here it is. I was thinking it would be easiest for me to understand what you're saying if you try to put you're thought in to one sentence. Point -> Reason style.


For example: “It sucks because it's off beat” 

or

                     “It's good because it's on beat”


If that's not possible, whatever, no biggie. 


iight, SAY WHAT YA THINK!


Thank you

Ryan - Freestyles 01 (Prod. by Atomic Beats and 2Deep)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v…..C7kDoiFw3U 

You can only succeed.
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