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http://www.myspace.com/edubbtheboss
or
http://www.wemix.com/Edubb
just listen if you can let me know what you think i know yall know what your talkin bout
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1:15 am
August 25, 2008
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Playboy
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If you’re meaning to come off sounding cool than this feedback will be on the downside. I’m going to go under the impression that you’re trying to come off sounding funny. That be the case… then I actually like this. I would just try to work on your delivery a little more. Try to be a little more animated with the lyrics. and be a little more selective on the beat choices. You could really get something going for yourself. I’d aim towards the humorous rap though. Once again… hope that’s what you were trying to do… cause if it is i might be a fan one day.
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12:26 pm
August 25, 2008
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JaMiNo
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Yeah, you need to sit down and rethink your whole Rap “voice”. I talk a lot about Mic Presence - and the fact is, yours is pretty weak - I mean, after about 10 seconds I was bored. You’re a) not being powerful enough, b) not being confident enough and c) not sounding like a serious artist. Your voice, at least the effect you’re trying to get across with your voice isn’t suited for the style of rap you’re trying to boast, or any style of rap i’m familiar with. Work on that.
FIVE ONE THIRD is your best song. Mainly because you aint doing that shit with your voice and because of this your flow comes of a HELL OF A LOT better than in your over songs. However, you sound like you’re trying to keep your voice down. Like you’re afraid your parents might hear you. This has a MASSIVE effect on how people are going to judge you in one of the cockiest genres of music in the industry.
Young Johnny was pretty decent though, if you know him personally, don’t be afraid to ask him for some HONEST advice. You can learn a lot from him. Don’t let negative criticism get you down though, use it to better yourself.
Stay up homie.
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4:02 pm
August 25, 2008
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Ca$h Flow
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Well, I would start with taking soulja boy off ya top friends, lol, jk
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4:05 pm
August 25, 2008
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lmswann
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Yo im feelin the five one third, the swag on that is tight. I think your good, just turn yourself up so we can hear more of what your saying and feel your swagger, and be more creative in your lyrics.
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thanks yall appreciate the honesty
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4:41 pm
August 25, 2008
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Playboy
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cashflow said:
Well, I would start with taking soulja boy off ya top friends, lol, jk
AMEN
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