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1:41 am
September 26, 2008
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tizzy4
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This was just some shit I did when I tried to rap fast in the second verse.Not a real song. the second verse is something I did at a open Mic show to let em know I could flow faster .I get bored in the studio and always have time left to just throw some shit together..and yeah I know the hook sucks…lol..It’s unfinished so bear with me lol.Feedback from everybody is appreciated…. http://www.zshare.net/audio/19437965bd64170d/
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1:15 am
September 27, 2008
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Madd Hatter
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I like the fast rapping, i only heard the first 30 seconds and it was buffering and shit…downloading it now though.
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10:51 am
September 27, 2008
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typhoon227
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i like it. that’s probably just cause i can’t put a flow together too well, but a nigga do try.
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2:44 pm
September 27, 2008
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dreadedone
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tizzy4 said:
This was just some shit I did when I tried to rap fast in the second verse.Not a real song. the second verse is something I did at a open Mic show to let em know I could flow faster .I get bored in the studio and always have time left to just throw some shit together..and yeah I know the hook sucks…lol..It’s unfinished so bear with me lol.Feedback from everybody is appreciated…. http://www.zshare.net/audio/19437965bd64170d/
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Damn man. That shit sounds tight. One suggestion though. Don’t rhyme the same sounding words too much together on the slower parts of the song - it does no justice to your lyrical sound. Either way though. That shit is damn good man.
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3:23 pm
September 27, 2008
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Turtle
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I do like to rap fast from time to time. And one thing I learned that makes fast rappers seem like ‘posers’ is overuse of words like “mother fucker” and “never ever” because its for some reason like an easy way to fill in words to give that double paced speed kn the beat. Not saying you did, just a tip.
And yeah it was good I understood every word. But with your voice its hard to convince me you can pull off that flow style on a serious track. But you surprised me before so I can’t saying nothing lol.
Edit: And yeah like that girl above me said, your overuse of similar sounding words may get repetitive. It’s not a baaad thing because I like to do it a lot too (I think it does show some lyrical skill if you’re dropping some sick lines and can link them together so they all rhyme as long as its not adding the words ’so, oh, no, yo’ instead more clever). Just that most if not all your track use that same flow so its giving the image that there’s no versatility. I actually predicted a few of your rhymes.
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3:32 pm
September 27, 2008
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Turtle
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I felt so gay when I predicted “I’m the real show stopper, ya’ll just danity kane” haha. It was a sick line though.
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4:45 pm
September 27, 2008
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tizzy4
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rubs said:
I do like to rap fast from time to time. And one thing I learned that makes fast rappers seem like ‘posers’ is overuse of words like “mother fucker” and “never ever” because its for some reason like an easy way to fill in words to give that double paced speed kn the beat. Not saying you did, just a tip.
And yeah it was good I understood every word. But with your voice its hard to convince me you can pull off that flow style on a serious track. But you surprised me before so I can’t saying nothing lol.
Edit: And yeah like that girl above me said, your overuse of similar sounding words may get repetitive. It’s not a baaad thing because I like to do it a lot too (I think it does show some lyrical skill if you’re dropping some sick lines and can link them together so they all rhyme as long as its not adding the words ’so, oh, no, yo’ instead more clever). Just that most if not all your track use that same flow so its giving the image that there’s no versatility. I actually predicted a few of your rhymes.
Well I guess I have to introduce you to Southpole then..My other personality..lol..peep out this track I did called Get you in the Zone..I mellowed out my voice..might trip some people out..of course I harmonized on it as well..
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5:38 pm
September 27, 2008
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Turtle
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Sure link me. I’m always down for music.
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12:34 am
September 28, 2008
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tizzy4
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rubs said:
Sure link me. I’m always down for music.
alright the track is up now..Look for Mellowed out Tizzy track. The hook is catchy if i do say so myself..lol
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1:17 am
September 28, 2008
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tizzy4
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rubs said:
I do like to rap fast from time to time. And one thing I learned that makes fast rappers seem like ‘posers’ is overuse of words like “mother fucker” and “never ever” because its for some reason like an easy way to fill in words to give that double paced speed kn the beat. Not saying you did, just a tip.
And yeah it was good I understood every word. But with your voice its hard to convince me you can pull off that flow style on a serious track. But you surprised me before so I can’t saying nothing lol.
Edit: And yeah like that girl above me said, your overuse of similar sounding words may get repetitive. It’s not a baaad thing because I like to do it a lot too (I think it does show some lyrical skill if you’re dropping some sick lines and can link them together so they all rhyme as long as its not adding the words ’so, oh, no, yo’ instead more clever). Just that most if not all your track use that same flow so its giving the image that there’s no versatility. I actually predicted a few of your rhymes.
Peep out For Dem pimp girls as well..
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