dreadedone said:

tizzy4 said:

This was just some shit I did when I tried to rap fast in the second verse.Not a real song. the second verse is something I did at a open Mic show to let em know I could flow faster .I get bored in the studio and always have time left to just throw some shit together..and yeah I know the hook sucks…lol..It’s unfinished so bear with me lol.Feedback from everybody is appreciated…. http://www.zshare.net/audio/19437965bd64170d/

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Damn man. That shit sounds tight. One suggestion though. Don’t rhyme the same sounding words too much together on the slower parts of the song - it does no justice to your lyrical sound. Either way though. That shit is damn good man.Thank you..and thanks for the feedback..I have been trying to stop doing that..lolI just put up like 5 more songs..peep em out..I think you might Love da song called For Dem Pimp girls..