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ANOTHER ONE!

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1:54 am
November 11, 2008


yungcam614

Foot Soldier

Columbus,OH

posts 77

1

i accidentally posted this beat in the emcee's corner so i know no producers would catch it but i made another beat and its not for free download…im not putting it on soundclick untill next week when my other beats have had time to hit the charts….the beat is called ''fast paper'' and you can go liten to it at

http://www.goldmic.com/yungcam614 be sure to let me know what u all think…honestly!

2:26 am
November 11, 2008


p.i.k.k.

Kingpin

Hells Basment

posts 564

2

Not one of your best beats.

Good things about it:

Loved the snare rolls and the synths are coming out more clearer. I can see your getting more knowledged about the crunk style/design, which is good.

Criticism:

The bass is distorted again, which is just the velocity in your bass drums. Your clap is to low and dry. Try increasing the velocity on it, heightening the reverb a little, and lessening the damp. Also, the melodies do not blend and are not in tune, especially in the hook. Fam, its better if you get more creative with the break downs, build ups, and change ups. Study into that if your really serious about selling your beats. If any instrument is off tune or the melodies do not blend together in a perfect harmony, the potential buyer will go, “Nope…” x's out.

Creativity and quality are the key to a succesful buisness in beats. Im laying it on thicker because I see your charging now, and I want you to understand that these beats that you are charging for will not cut it in this industry. There are to many of us out there, and trust me, there's cats who have been doing this for 15 years and still charge $75-100 a beat. You have to become better then your competition or else they will eat you alive. Its all love fam. 1.

2:40 am
November 11, 2008


yungcam614

Foot Soldier

Columbus,OH

posts 77

3

i didnt expect a good reply from anyone on this one…i jus wanted to see what people would say….i made this beat in 20 minutes real talk….i have 6 people at my nevk about it right now lol….but pikk you are my homie…i love how u keep it so real ( no homo)

 
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