Ha, i was actually feelin this one. Real grimey with the synths, n the drums were on point with the atmosphere/mood of the beat.

Only criticism I can find on this is:
1. Focus on your mixing, some synths dont fill in, which just need to be EQ'd a little more.
2. The hook was good with the synths. I was diggin the idea of the melody, but after the first 8th note you should of went with a key change, maybe lowered a bit into the minor key to complete that dark/grimey texture of the beat or maybe mix the lower key melody with the same melody in a higher key. Then again, thats an opinion not really critique wise. Just a thought.
3. Try and bring build ups. The change over to the bell synth was a good start, but something else would of collected that momentum and brought out the hook more.

Other then that, I liked the beat. Cant wait to hear the finished version. Good job.