hey Ive been makin beats for about a year now. I just finished this one a few days ago and I need some advice/feedback. thanks

http://www.zshare.net/audio/186524015a547940/

Drum pattern might sound near like 2Deep, but the drums arent anywhere near 2Deeps.

By the way, heard this sample before: Hell House. The tempo isnt fast enough to keep the drums and the sample in tuned. There wasnt any build ups to the hook, and the hook wasnt strong enough with the strings. I’d of went with atleast sum higher turned bells in the hook or a higher tuned string solo or something. Gave it a catch melody or something.

Beat wasnt good, but I’ve heard worse. 3.8/10.