Post edited 11:57 am - January 24, 2009 by p.I.k.k.
Actually. This is a pretty fun beat. The melodies are wild and creative, very enjoyable.
But, I do have some criticism, take it in..
Entrance could of been a better build up that dropped into the verse. Maybe drum interludes that just smashed in during the guitar.
There should be more of an atmosphere to the beat. I would of added in a low synth or a low synth stretching bassline and gave it light reverb, but so, that it still spreads. That gives the mood of the beat.
The build ups of your beat could of been more complex. The structure was lacking a tad bit, but it wasn't as bad as I've heard. You atleast put in build up's with the strings, so dope for that. This reminds me of something I would of made at your age, building wise.
I actually enjoyed the drums a little bit. Felt it did fit right in the with the beat, but I'm a raw drums man myself. A little more compression and EQ'n on them would of blended em in a little bitter.
Again, this would of been killer to have a bassline. And I would of added a little more Amp effect to the guitar, a light reverb, something to get it more umph.
Hook had a great melody. Just would of made more sense to be staccatos not flute, in my opinion.
But aye, nice work. 7.1/10.