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My new beat please listen
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7:49 am
January 24, 2009


sentar

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Hey I am 14 i' ve made my second beat could people and slantize, sinima and everyone listen and feedback and tell me if a have to change anything. Thanks a lot

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8:41 am
January 24, 2009


Tricky

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k first of all u dont put electric guitar with a flute…

second of all it was badly synchronized the drum pattern dindt fit the melody

the instruments dindt go  together some of ur instruments were WAY too noisy


i suggest u to retry and fix the lacks in it


now i dont know if its only me who thinks that ull have to see the other posts

10:42 am
January 24, 2009


aram2244

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wasn't a bad beat.

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11:26 am
January 24, 2009


C-Side

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ay man, dont listen to halo cuz halo, where are your posts? anyway, the melody was dope, i loved all the guitar change ups, but, the drum pattern doesn't quite match up, also if you want i have tons of drum packs you can load into fl studio, those drums are mad old, also contact me if you ever have any questions about fl studio i have been using it for three years i am 14 as well, hit me up at christiantorrisi@yahoo.com

I aint a freshman but im still fresh. man myspace.com/csidemusic

12:56 pm
January 24, 2009


p!!kk

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Post edited 11:57 am - January 24, 2009 by p.I.k.k.

Actually. This is a pretty fun beat. The melodies are wild and creative, very enjoyable.

But, I do have some criticism, take it in..

Entrance could of been a better build up that dropped into the verse. Maybe drum interludes that just smashed in during the guitar.

There should be more of an atmosphere to the beat. I would of added in a low synth or a low synth  stretching bassline and gave it light reverb, but so, that it still spreads. That gives the mood of the beat.

The build ups of your beat could of been more complex. The structure was lacking a tad bit, but it wasn't as bad as I've heard. You atleast put in build up's with the strings, so dope for that. This reminds me of something I would of made at your age, building wise.

I actually enjoyed the drums a little bit. Felt it did fit right in the with the beat, but I'm a raw drums man myself. A little more compression and EQ'n on them would of blended em in a little bitter.

Again, this would of been killer to have a bassline. And I would of added a little more Amp effect to the guitar, a light reverb, something to get it more umph.

Hook had a great melody. Just would of made more sense to be staccatos not flute, in my opinion.

But aye, nice work. 7.1/10.

1:58 pm
January 24, 2009


Tricky

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Post edited 1:01 pm - January 24, 2009 by halo440

c-side2007 said:

ay man, dont listen to halo cuz halo, where are your posts? anyway, the melody was dope, i loved all the guitar change ups, but, the drum pattern doesn't quite match up, also if you want i have tons of drum packs you can load into fl studio, those drums are mad old, also contact me if you ever have any questions about fl studio i have been using it for three years i am 14 as well, hit me up at christiantorrisi@yahoo.com

u said the god dam same thing i did but different smarty pants


even pikk says he shud use sum else then a flute


so go post somewhr else  u aint beeing usefull here
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