ok its that time again….i need critics baby! another hot beat yes yes…. p.i.k.k where u at? lol its free for download and i need ratings and comments….listen and tell me what u all think….dont be lazy people! its called ''Goin Ham''

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I agree with Dezi. They are getting better.

I like this one because it has alot of instrument change up's. The melodies are also catchy-er then your other beats. I can see your improving in that area. Also it has more break downs, which is what you want to hear from a southern/crunk beat.

Heres my criticism.

Your velocity on the bassdrums is to high and is still coming out distorted. A slight lowering of the bass would help that. I know you dont know much about EQ'n either, but look into that. The velocity on the pizzicatos are also to high. Some reverb on them wouldnt of hurt either. I was also hoping you'd put more of an atmosphere in the beat. Its just not enough movement in the beat for that crunk style and its to blank when you listen beyond the instruments. The synths were a little dry also. The drums, say the hats and claps are to plain and dry. Again reverb would help on this.

But, all in all you are getting better. And Im sure feedback is the best thing. Keep it up fam. 5.9/10.

Hmm, The Beat Shows You Got Potential Bro. BUT, Let Me Point Some Things Out.

The velocity on the synth is too high. you want you leave room for the rapper. you should be able to hear the kicks and claps, and hats. also, change up the whistle melody bro. imma be honest. it annoyed the hell outta me cuz it just does the same thing over and over. the bells or music box was okay. but it sounded way to blank in the background. Use a soft Pad or Somthing to kinda fill that up.

Anyways, Overall i'd rate it a 4/10.

use more than 3 instruments on a beat, but dont switch up the melodies to much. like after every fourth bar make something closly alike to the original melody, but add a few notes here and there to lead into the hook.

good lookin bro…its good to get more than one producers point of view….