1st guy is soundin like his holdin back massively, lyrics are nice, but he needs to put some more emotion in it.
basicly de second and third guy are a LIL better with de emotion but de beat n de hold thing is kinda low, so it still sounds like u turned de beat down on purpose so it can b heard if u rap silently. but if ur usin cool edit, try not to turn de beat under -2.0, its how i usually put it, and i think i got de relationship of vocal n beat figured out for now. then i set de mic to 50 % volume, get like ~15 cm away from de mic n let myself go, i mean, i often yell, i only record when im home alon, cuz it wud bother my family, and i have no doubt even de neighbours can hear me. but my point bein..
…de lyrics and de beat i liked, i thot u do not have a problem with dat department (and by u i mean u all), but u shud all work on vocal presence. and i dont say dat cuz im tryin to hate, yup, dats it.
here we got de whole post in a lil more proper english for u to understand :
1st guy is sounding like his holdin back massively, lyrics are nice, but he needs to put some more emotion in it.
Basicly the second and third guy are a LITTLE better with the emotion but the beat and the whole thing is kinda low, so it still sounds like you turned the beat down on purpose so it can be heard if you rap silently. But if you're usin cool edit, try not to turn the beat under -2.0, its how i usually put it, and i think i got the relationship of the vocal and beat figured out for now. Then i set the mic to 50 % volume, get like ~15 cm away from the mic and let myself go, i mean, i often yell, i only record when im home alone, because it would bother my family, and i have no doubt even the neighbours can hear me. But my point being..
…the lyrics and the beat i liked, i thought you do not have a problem with that department (and by you i mean you all), but you should all work on vocalpresence. And i dont say that because im trying to hate, just making it clear
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