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Presidential….New Beat…Comment Please

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7:59 pm
November 3, 2008


yungcam614

Foot Soldier

Columbus,OH

posts 77

1

yes sir! another one by yours truly….any open comments are appreciated….its on my soundclick page….its call presidential….and yes sir this is another free download….so grab it while u can


http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7030122

or

soundclick.com/yungcam to listen to all of my beats and songs….. add me! myspace.com/yungcam4 goldmic.com/yungcam614

10:11 pm
November 3, 2008


tim treezy aka Dezi

Kingpin

Digital Velocity

posts 819

2

your best beat, i like this one.

12:10 am
November 4, 2008


droppndymez

Underling

Kansas

posts 17

3

I was so definitely feeling that.

12:53 am
November 4, 2008


yungcam614

Foot Soldier

Columbus,OH

posts 77

4

thanks thanks…i appreciate the feedback…anymore anyone?….anyone? coughP.I.K.K.cough lol u know i need u bro….u give my shyt the full rundown

hey and by the way…anyone that listens to my beats and songs….be sure to rate everything u hear please….i would like 4 people to voice their honest opinions….how am i supposed to get better and bring all of u what u want when ur not telling the truth about what u like and whatu dont like? think about it people….please rate my stuff tho!

1:35 am
November 4, 2008


p.i.k.k.

Kingpin

Hells Basment

posts 561

5

Lol, sorry Im late.

I agree with Dezi, this is your best beat yet, but lemme tell you what I like about it first. Its more organized and the structure of it is better then all of your beats. The drums like the snares and hats are more clear and it gives it that more head noddin rhythum.

What I think you could work on: The bass drums are to low. Sure, if I had my woofers plugged it, it would hit, but the full idea of it would of been to compress your drum and increase the lower output, but to lower the higher output of it so it didnt constort when the waves met. Give it that clear but BOOOOOM bass. Also, the brass got a little to boring. Melodies were also to simple with em. You should definitely invest your time in finding more instruments and if you can, just try and think of the catchiest shit. Like sing something you'd think would make every sing along and put that into a melody. The brass is also off in the builds up and hooks. The looped saw synth should also be more clearer. Adding reverb and seperating it to each side could help this. You should also learn to EQ your instruments and drums. This will give you great quality in your music.

Your getting better every beat. I'll give this one a 5.8/10. Keep it up fam.

1:45 am
November 4, 2008


yungcam614

Foot Soldier

Columbus,OH

posts 77

6

i need someone to teach me how to do all of that reverb and fixing waves meeting and shyt lol…maybe u should give me a tutorial or links to some tutorials….and if u have any extra FL sounds…or plugins u should send them to me.,…because i could use more sounds than what i got and thanks p.i.k.k your really my fav person on the site lol (no homo)

 
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