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Anthem Of A King—-TWEAK

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6:48 pm
July 25, 2008


Staxxx

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Posts: 29

NEW YORK

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i did rly s**tty but this is my first time goin on a mic with a instrumental behind it…….. http://www.myspace.com/eastsideclownklick

tell me if it was bad or not be honest…….i think it sucked….KILLER BEAT THO SLANTIZE…..and im a newcomer by the way i jus started rappin like 2 months ago…..and im only 16 ..

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7:26 pm
July 25, 2008


Shadow

Posts: 5958

Somewhere near a bunch of beavers….

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put me to sleep to be honest…..but it is ur first, and im not “hatin” cuz us a juggalo….but ur chorus needs work, your lyrics needs work, and your flow needs work…in due time, you’ll get the hang of it , jus keep practicing…also dont be afraid to scream into the mic to help ur vocals out if ur mic quality isnt to good (cuz its not lol)…be loud then adjust it in the program u use to record….and if you dont know by now, i think ur using “audacity” say good bye to that n step up to cool edit pro (adobe audition) or mixcraft….the more u learn n understand the program you use and effects you got…the better you’ll be at mixing/mastering your tracks……so just remember…..practice….read your lyrics outloud back to yourself if u have to….and keep in mind….”will this grab anyone’s attention”….once you’ve got that fixed…you can go for “who’se attention do i want to grab”? ….rite?…so good luck, and stay at it

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7:36 pm
July 25, 2008


Staxxx

Initiate

Posts: 29

NEW YORK

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i appreciate what u told me…and yes u were right i was using audicity…but ill deef get one of the programs u told me about….but thanks for being honest tho….mcl

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5:02 am
July 26, 2008


PK

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1867

Tallinn

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hm, i listened and heres wat i came up wit:

u NEED a better mic, im not sayin u mite get a new one. im SAYIN u HAV to get it. u also need to make doubles to make it sound better. AND, dont go thru a song wit ease, work on ur song to perfect it. see dats why newcomers put upsongs dat dey never had worked wit hard. and ppl like COBRA worked on his version on de beat for a LONG time, and it came out bangin. ya digg me ? i aint tryin to say ur s**t, im just sayin wat u cud do, to make urself better. good luck

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9:30 am
July 26, 2008


king cobra

Posts: 2754

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Why is this topic in text battles…

12:16 pm
July 26, 2008


Staxxx

Initiate

Posts: 29

NEW YORK

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i know what u guys mean thx tho alot….

[]]]] STAXXX [[[[]