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Arab Soldier Vs. Liquid Smoke

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7:38 pm
February 20, 2008


Shadow

Posts: 5957

Somewhere near a bunch of beavers….

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Arab:

punches:3

multis:3

vocab:4

personals:4

structure:4

total: 18

Liquid 

punches:4

multis:4

vocab:3 

personals:4

structure:4

total: 19

I don’t own Shadowville

7:53 pm
February 20, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

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Arab Solider - 17
Multis - 3
Vocab - 4
Structure - 4
Personals - 3
Punches - 3

Multis,Personals,and Punches were all average but good.Vocab was pretty good and Structure was easy to read.

Liquid Smoke - 13
Multis - 3
Vocab - 3
Structure - 1
Personals - 3
Punches - 3

You did do better but still wasnt good enough to me.I still think your Structure was bad.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

8:58 pm
February 20, 2008


JaMiNo

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 836

ReiGNiNG TeXT-BaTTLe CHaMPioN

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Arab Soldier said:

                          

Keywords 

Eulogy- a speech or writing in praise of a person or thing.

The term "eulogy" may refer to a funeral oration given in tribute to a person or people who have recently died.

Shrine-was originally a container, usually made of precious materials. By extension it has come to mean a holy or sacred place containing the reliquary or tomb dedicated to a particular hero, martyr, saint.


Ok, sorry to get so riled up over something that is probably nothing, but I’m not a f**king idiot.  If you’re gonna define words, make sure they’re WORTH defining.  I mean seriously… Eulogy and Shrine.  What are we, retards?

Anyway.

Arab - 12
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Structure: 3
Multis: 2
Vocab: 3
Punches: 2
Personals: 2

Way too many personal stabs relating to Vyce.  Some of your punches don’t make any sense, and the s**t about rolling him up and smoking him?  Why?  You mentioned it twice.  Why?  Structure was better in verse 1 than verse 2 and multis, there were a couple, but not many.  You listen to Hyoujin, and you’re an idiot.

 

Liquid - 14
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Structure: 3
Multis: 3
Vocab: 3
Punches: 2
Personals: 3

Personals were better, punches were a little weak and sparse.  Structure was a little tricky on the eye, but it read out ok to me in my head, so I thought it was alright.  More to the point, you didn’t confuse me, and your verses were stronger than Arabs - keep working on it.

 

HoT oN THe BeaTS… LiKe HeaRTBuRN!

9:28 pm
February 20, 2008


king cobra

Posts: 2754

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Liquid wins this one 3 -1. Battle is now closed and scoreboard has been updated