Arab Soldier said:
Keywords
Eulogy- a speech or writing in praise of a person or thing.
The term "eulogy" may refer to a funeral oration given in tribute to a person or people who have recently died.
Shrine-was originally a container, usually made of precious materials. By extension it has come to mean a holy or sacred place containing the reliquary or tomb dedicated to a particular hero, martyr, saint.
Ok, sorry to get so riled up over something that is probably nothing, but I’m not a f**king idiot. If you’re gonna define words, make sure they’re WORTH defining. I mean seriously… Eulogy and Shrine. What are we, retards?
Anyway.
Arab - 12
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Structure: 3
Multis: 2
Vocab: 3
Punches: 2
Personals: 2
Way too many personal stabs relating to Vyce. Some of your punches don’t make any sense, and the s**t about rolling him up and smoking him? Why? You mentioned it twice. Why? Structure was better in verse 1 than verse 2 and multis, there were a couple, but not many. You listen to Hyoujin, and you’re an idiot.
Liquid - 14
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Structure: 3
Multis: 3
Vocab: 3
Punches: 2
Personals: 3
Personals were better, punches were a little weak and sparse. Structure was a little tricky on the eye, but it read out ok to me in my head, so I thought it was alright. More to the point, you didn’t confuse me, and your verses were stronger than Arabs - keep working on it.
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