ArsenousOxide aka Lil Assassin:

Multis - 2

Punchlines - 3

Vocabulary - 3

Personals - 3

Structure - 3

Overall Score - 14

Prime:

Multis - 3

Punchlines - 2

Vocabulary - 3

Personals - 2

Structure - 3

Overall Score - 13

My personal constructed criticism(which means you don't have to take it to heart, or even pay attention to it if you don't want to) is that you both need work. For example, being a bit more creative. I.E. lines such as:

“Truth is you’ll never be better, and you will lose to Prime forever”/

Doesn't do damage, and is pretty much, to say the least, obsolete.

But good job, both of you.

Oh well, you were the third person to give me a vote, and according to the rules that declares me the winner, so it's whatever lol.

Prime said:

This is my time, im on my prime, my rhymes are fully developed/

And its not that your not developed is just that you havent hit puberty yet/

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This guy is straight dookie, as expected from a low-class-rookie/

Beat down so badly by the school bully, he graduated a raisin, people LOOKIE!LOOKIE!/

You aint only ugly, you a fatty, we learned about you in geology/

Your age is determined by the number of stretch marks in your body/ (Tree-ring-dating)

Yo…..Yo….Yo…..1…………2…………3/

Feel the underground presence, hip-hop aint got a structure, You a slave, you aint truly free/

This cat acting like he got a grammy, adoring his lyrics so fondly/

Reality is your crappy, your jokes are lame, you’d lose to Bill Cosby/

You take too much credit, a score of all 1's is what you fit/

You said a new style you invented, or did Spades let you rent it/

See, you aint get paid a dime to rhmyme/

While I shine, people still expecting a sequel to optimus prime/

Make your mind up, why do you have three names?/

Did each one give you a reason why you were lame/

How you gonna give him a better score in punchlines and personals… Most of his stuff ya heard already. His second verse wasnt that much better than mines. $Remember i'll keep that in mind next time you battle$ What goes around comes around

Prime said:

Prime said:

This is my time, im on my prime, my rhymes are fully developed/

And its not that your not developed is just that you havent hit puberty yet/

———————————————————————————————————-

This guy is straight dookie, as expected from a low-class-rookie/

Beat down so badly by the school bully, he graduated a raisin, people LOOKIE!LOOKIE!/

You aint only ugly, you a fatty, we learned about you in geology/

Your age is determined by the number of stretch marks in your body/ (Tree-ring-dating)

Yo…..Yo….Yo…..1…………2…………3/

Feel the underground presence, hip-hop aint got a structure, You a slave, you aint truly free/

This cat acting like he got a grammy, adoring his lyrics so fondly/

Reality is your crappy, your jokes are lame, you’d lose to Bill Cosby/

You take too much credit, a score of all 1's is what you fit/

You said a new style you invented, or did Spades let you rent it/

See, you aint get paid a dime to rhmyme/

While I shine, people still expecting a sequel to optimus prime/

Make your mind up, why do you have three names?/

Did each one give you a reason why you were lame/

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How you gonna give him a better score in punchlines and personals… Most of his stuff ya heard already. His second verse wasnt that much better than mines. $Remember i'll keep that in mind next time you battle$ What goes around comes around

lol. Looks like I should be expecting a 'hate vote' in my next battle.

Come on people lets get the votes on! This battle has been over for a day now and we have only ONE vote!?