i left it the same just spell the whole word, capd what rymed and , the lines

remember this is my first i just edited it and just cut sum bars because of the caps its EXACTLY THE SAME just cut off the end so i dont get disqualified.

JOSH.LYNN, u better watch what ur SAYIN it MIGHT be COSTIN u ur LIFE TONIGHT, i aint PLAYIN, ME LOSIN to YOU is a DREAM to YOU, YOU should know it will NEVER-COME-TRUE, if YOU EVER-COME-THROUGH MY TOWN ur’ll get GUNED DOWN, bitch I never CLOWN its not the way I get DOWN,Ii run this shit like CHRIS BROWN, ill b TIPPIN MY CROWN and TELLIN u to KISS MY BROWN EYE, don’t EVEN TRY to FRONT on, ME I’LL STUN and STUNT ALL OVER you, I’LL CALL YOUR HO OVER, BEND HER OVER, THEN HER WALKIN DAYS WILL BE OVER, AFTER this YOUR TALKIN DAYS WILL BE OVER TOO, all your gonna DO is read and say DU-DU-DU-DUDE!! man I MURDERED u I HEARD-UR-RUDE but im at a higher ALTITUDE then YOU, LOOKIN DOWN AT YOU, LOOKIN up AT ME, WATCHIN ME, COOKIN UP a G, YOUR NEVER GONNA BE AS good AS ME, SEE im EVERYTHING you WANN-BE,MY LIFE your FANTASY!

i had to cut it short everything in there thats caped rymes with sumthin and i comma each line ask me what rymes with what next time i wont make it so complecated shit I WAS just CLOWNIN I WAS’INT even really TRYIN lol

so what up now? josh probly read it and probly takin all fukin day to write sumthin like a fag i just free it that why its type so shitty, u cant buy talent like mine lol

ok i didnt really wanna say nethin but de guy Josh is battlin (idk his name). his structure. it is NOT der, its utopically bad, if u followin me

i see it pretty good dude but wtf is with people here rappin about big ass word that dont mean shit get tech wit it shit i think skatin and playin mtg growin up helped my thought process alot

and plz dont call me tiger dude my last names purr thats bad enuf lol

and im j/kin about the rapper nation thing

HUMILIATIN U, STATIN U, DATE DUDES, gayer then YOU, i bet YOU love
it in ur POO POO, love LICKIN THE DOO DOO OFF THE DICK

HUMILIATIN U, STATIN U(comma here to take breathto say)DATE DUDES, gayer then YOU, i bet YOU love
it in ur POO POO, love LICKIN THE DOO DOO OFF THE DICK

say it (statin u-pause-date dudes) kinda shady like should of spelled out YOU all the way too

p.i.k.k. your the kind of person that looks for typos and bad grammer mistakes dude me sayin it and typin it are way diffrent if u heard me say it u would understand pefectly of what i directed at him, mock him about, and immatate him about u got to under u can tell a diss so many way story,stright rag about thiers lives, make shit up to make people be like DAM, fukin ur sopose to clown dude dont be all uptight about it my flow and styles are uniqe to me and people in my area u need to leanr to adapt bro ur u’ll be trapt at the same rank forever u know im not tryin to REALLY diss on anyone just clownin for fun ya know

i respect anyone that CAN rap not just front and doin it tryin to get famous and shit and i hate people that rip other peoples shit off, if u use someone else shit say that u are like im like*i might not of wrote it but i myswell qoute it*. ya know?

well take it easy vote for ur favorite wither it be me or not idc im my own judge,imo to be good AT ANYTHING you should first know what good and what not in that subject until u know that ur’ll be nothing and belive anything.

gtg peace

cap zero said:

HUMILIATIN U, STATIN U, DATE DUDES, gayer then YOU, i bet YOU love
it in ur POO POO, love LICKIN THE DOO DOO OFF THE DICK

HUMILIATIN U, STATIN U(comma here to take breathto say)DATE DUDES, gayer then YOU, i bet YOU love
it in ur POO POO, love LICKIN THE DOO DOO OFF THE DICK

say it (statin u-pause-date dudes) kinda shady like should of spelled out YOU all the way too

p.i.k.k. your the kind of person that looks for typos and bad grammer mistakes dude me sayin it and typin it are way diffrent if u heard me say it u would understand pefectly of what i directed at him, mock him about, and immatate him about u got to under u can tell a diss so many way story,stright rag about thiers lives, make shit up to make people be like DAM, fukin ur sopose to clown dude dont be all uptight about it my flow and styles are uniqe to me and people in my area u need to leanr to adapt bro ur u’ll be trapt at the same rank forever u know im not tryin to REALLY diss on anyone just clownin for fun ya know

i respect anyone that CAN rap not just front and doin it tryin to get famous and shit and i hate people that rip other peoples shit off, if u use someone else shit say that u are like im like*i might not of wrote it but i myswell qoute it*. ya know?

well take it easy vote for ur favorite wither it be me or not idc im my own judge,imo to be good AT ANYTHING you should first know what good and what not in that subject until u know that ur’ll be nothing and belive anything.

gtg peace

All in good humor my friend. -Winks.