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G Pimp VS The Krypt

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6:38 pm
February 11, 2008


G Pimp

Initiate

Posts: 42

1

yo… check it  1st verse

 My bars are dumb hot, call me a lyrical mastermind, The Krypt’s a bum jock so ill murk his ass to pass the time so pass the wine, im an alky n your spittins wack and past its prime- but f**k it thats already been known, plus my flows like an STD its full blown, your a tool homes, so slow your roll wit me like you entered a school zone, f**kin krypt keeper probly be a b*tch beater, and a dime-a-d**k eater, plus you know I ryhme sweeter strapped wit a 9 heater,

But the 9 known to jam so I hold the ruger steady, like im ready, Krypt you "Delerious" like "Eddie" , uglier than "Freddy" and your whole style missin somthin like sauce without "Spaghetti"

……had to bounce so its just a short 1


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7:46 pm
February 11, 2008


Shadow

Posts: 5957

Somewhere near a bunch of beavers….

2

you might wana fix your structure, cuz other will vote low on it, jus check around the text battle threads n you’ll see the "proper ways" lol…..now that thas thru

 

i liked it was good, i could read it fine so for structure i give a  3 jus a heads up, if you want a 4 then jus look at the other battles where they got four, for it

I don’t own Shadowville

8:36 pm
February 11, 2008


The Crypts

Disciple

Posts: 19

3

everyone gather round please, and help this b*tch with his groceries G-Pimp, your lyrics is limp,and n talkin bout loadin clips, s**t, im ready ill break it down a bit, make u throw a hissy fit, cuz f**k wit me you be f**kin wit my clique

 my spittins wack? how would you know this is the first imma curse ready to dipurse, call your nurse, and grab your purse, cuz b*tch ill take you on a ride. my lyrics make me a genius, i mean this, they;ll read about this, G-Pimp defeated by the Crypts

 ill talk fast trash and bash on you to mutha f**ka, u just anotha sucka, but brothers showin their true colors, and damn right ill be the one to make u dead, cuz ill put the infared to your head, and get in you grill and ask "Whats that you said?"

 So ya betta back down, click click pow, thou shall not f**k with now. How should i sum this up, cuz homie you dont know me, So show me some real skill instead of talkin trash, you’d be able to spit betta if your head wasnt up ur moms ass

10:34 pm
February 11, 2008


The Crypts

Disciple

Posts: 19

4

verse 2

 

Ill go loco on ur ass, Smokin a fat pound of grass, im like the energizer bunny you cant outlast, imma outcast, knockin you out with my brass, ill take ya to school, this is my class, and ur dead last, so you aint neva gunna pass.

your a has been, remindin me of Michael Jackson, saw you at neverland, sleepin with a little man, but actin like R-Kelly, i saw you take a piss on his belly! ur a homo, you know who spits betta then you? Perry Como

ive had enugh of ur stuff, im callin ur bluff, you aint got nothin on me, this verse will make you history, it’ll be a mystery " Wheres G-Pimp at?" hes in a hurry, to get the f**k out, of this bout, without a doubt

its a given, that im deliverin, my s**t, see you quiverin in the corner with Richard Simmins, Sweatin to the oldies, imma OG, your neva gunna be a homie, live at home with daddy and mummy, cuz your s**t aint neva gunna make any money

11:26 pm
February 11, 2008


G Pimp

Initiate

Posts: 42

5

o kay kay kay…. lol

f**k all that take you to class last past s**t show me some real raps// Ill make you fall on your ass so fast b*tch, after I peel caps//

So im bombin on you Krypt wit heavy ammunition// This cat dreams of gay sex, cuz hes ready and hes wishin//

Any position, how can there be an aquisition// you gets no charity from me son this aint no World Vision//

This guy probly a rocker somthin like mic jagger// but wit my flow sharper than a dagger- Ill stab you in the bladder wit the lyrical switchblade cus KRYPT is Bitchmade!!

You spittin hospital flow called "why’d-i-flow-sis" in GENERAL//And you aint never gettin better ya diagnosis is TERMINAL

Even if you was Fidel Castro, wit a style hotter than tabasco… you couldnt touch my last flow cuz im to rich wit it… countin up my cashflow…..   f**kin a**hole!

12:22 am
February 12, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

6

G Pimp - 12
Multis - 4
Vocab - 2
Structure - 2
Personals - 2
Punches - 2

You got Multis on lock down,Keep it up.Vocab needs some work.Your Structure was all over the place,It would have been a 3 if your 1st verse was like your 2nd.You had an desent ammount of Personals just not enough to get a 3.Your Punches werent that Creative or funny.

The Crypts - 15
Multis - 5
Vocab - 3
Structure - 2
Personals - 3
Punches - 2

You just dominated in Multis,Keep it up.Your Vocab was good.Structure was Ok but needs improvement.You had a good ammount of Personals in there.Punches werent that funny but were a little bit creative.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

12:32 am
February 12, 2008


G Pimp

Initiate

Posts: 42

7

ok im baffled punches 2…. are you kidding me is this guy for real?

12:34 am
February 12, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

8

G Pimp said:

ok im baffled punches 2…. are you kidding me is this guy for real?


Your Punches werent that Creative,Look up what Punches are on here.Its Jokes and Creative WordPlay and those Jokes werent that Creative.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

3:48 am
February 12, 2008


white rhino

Adept

Posts: 156

Bloomington, Indiana

9

Spadez I gotta disagree with ya here just a little bit

 

Crypts

Punches 2

Structure 2

Personals 2

Multis  3

Vocab 3

total: 12

 

G Pimp

Punches 3

Structure 2

Personals 3

Multis 4

Vocab 3

 total:15

 

 Crypts …. your lines just didn’t flow at all in my head… I like how G Pimp worked his second verse so his lines matched up but his first one’s structure was totally f**ked, so that cost ya. Spadez I just don’t see where you’re at with the 5 on multis, IMHO this was a clear-cut win for G Pimp

 

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8:15 am
February 12, 2008


djecko

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 565

Kissimmee, FL

10

The Crypts said:

 

 So ya betta back down, click click pow, thou shall not f**k with now. 


this shyt was hot as f**k lol….ill be voting wen i get back from work…if im needed