white rhino said:

Spadez I gotta disagree with ya here just a little bit

 

Crypts

Punches 2

Structure 2

Personals 2

Multis  3

Vocab 3

total: 12

 

G Pimp

Punches 3

Structure 2

Personals 3

Multis 4

Vocab 3

 total:15

 

 Crypts …. your lines just didn’t flow at all in my head… I like how G Pimp worked his second verse so his lines matched up but his first one’s structure was totally f**ked, so that cost ya. Spadez I just don’t see where you’re at with the 5 on multis, IMHO this was a clear-cut win for G Pimp

 

I guess we got different views on Multis then but i dont care.Everyone votes differently.

this didnt seem like a battle seemed more like song verses. they both were good verses, great mutlis but not really ne punches or personals. i got this about even, soi think i’ll leave it alone.

G Pimp
Multis - 4
Vocab - 3
Structure - 3
Personals - 3
Punches - 3

total: 16

your punches were funny, although i feel you coulda done way better on it…you also fixed your structure a bit more, so i gave you a 3

The Crypts
Multis - 5
Vocab - 3
Structure - 2.5
Personals - 3
Punches - 2

total: 15.5

was a close battle, crypt i could read your stuff fine aswell, u had great multies, but still your structure needs to be changed so that you will get better rates on it…and your punches could have been more damaging

good battle gentz

ya know you still need 1 more vote to win.f**kin idiot,you aint gonna beat me.And i gotta battle Cobra and Barker before i take your rookie win.

The Crypts said:

Rhino…you mentioned that it didnt flow in your head…like i said im a rapper not much of a freestyler, so im still in like song mode you know what i mean…if you heard how i rap you would understand that its my style im the fast type spitter

 

but in the end i still respect your desicion

OK right on I could see.. kind of on that early eminem fast tip ….

just try & construct lines that are like, each about 1 bar long and then separate them out like that. Make 16 of em. I think it works best to go setup/punch, or setup/soft punch/setup/strong punch as far as structure goes. If you check out my verses that’s pretty much what I’m trying to do.

BTW someone else vote in this so I can battle GPimp