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Gothy VS Yung Snow

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12:26 am
July 17, 2008


gothy

Journeyman

Posts: 86

1

Here goes.

This kid is put together with frightful weather /
He ‘fronts’ like he’s ‘cold’, but the ‘cold front’s’ been SEVERED /
I’ll hang this wack Jack Frost with a belt /
Bring more heat than Hell to watch Yung Snow melt /
Bitch, have you ever felt like you couldn’t show-joy? /
Hey people I’m destroying Frosty the Snowboy /
Snow, go back to the Island of Misfit Toys /
Before I leave you with Rudolph’s Nose, bloodied and destroyed /
Don’t be coy, you need to learn some respect /
Before I disconnect your torso from the bones in your neck /
Keep it in check, but now I digress /
Fuck beating yo ass, I’ll put two in ya chest /
I’m rocking a vest, so mess with the best /
And like Lamb of God, you’ll get Laid to Rest /
I’ll be robbing ya body ‘fore this battle is done /
I’m like Highlander b*tch! There can only be one /

Till my body collapses from my drug relapses / I’ll be spitting harder on the tracks than any other rapper / With my down south tactics, and my ghetto accent / I still remain the greatest with words since Scholastic


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12:35 am
July 17, 2008


yung snow

Disciple

Posts: 24

2

ayo here…

yeah my name is cold,
but my flow is hot,
talkin about merdurin me.
hahahahaha not.
homie stop,
before you get popped,
bul m-5,
will have ya body dropped,
i come with the power to defeat,
you gonna need a mic to stop it,
ill prolli stomp on u,
cuz u miccoscopic//
your ryhmes a joke,
lemmes gues,
you couldnt find the scop,
ill have u left just like ya rhymes,
cuz ya rhymes is broke,
imma design,
ya face is a kaliedascop,
if you anger me,
my daggers collide with ya throat,
you act famous,
mabey in the town where you run the show,
but round here i coldnt find you with a microscope,
homie you already know,
ima king,
yeah im on the thrown,
tellin me not to be coy,
learn ya place,
yo ass was just beat by,
frosty the snowboy

www.myspace.com/yungsnow1

12:51 am
July 17, 2008


gothy

Journeyman

Posts: 86

3

You were elected to be defective from the form of a fetus /
Stem Cell scientists ain’t buying-it, ugly fetus, not needed /
Even if I may be wack, the kettle calling the pot-black /
Ya Moms shoulda aborted you with a hanger and a shop-vac /
Try to come at me and I got something for you /
Even 1-800-SUICIDE, would click over and ignore you /
You need to stop rapping, I’ve heard-it-before /
Shoulda choked you out with your umbilical-cord /
I’ll flatten you quicker than centrifugal force /
Like “Trick or Treating” you’ll get served-at-the-door /
I’m the anti-Christ and I’m bringing you anti-life /
Like he stole lyrics but forgot the rhyme, a semi-heist /
This b*tch says he’s killed for riches and loot /
I bet he couldn’t be hard if he had Iron Man’s suit /
Nothing but a creep, putting words on a beat /
Then lying to the world “Yung Snow’s an Emcee!” /

Till my body collapses from my drug relapses / I’ll be spitting harder on the tracks than any other rapper / With my down south tactics, and my ghetto accent / I still remain the greatest with words since Scholastic

1:06 am
July 17, 2008


yung snow

Disciple

Posts: 24

4

ight

ima lyrical asasin,
talk s**t about me,
youll be missin in action,
f**k tha body,
my gun do the baggin,
yo gun laggin,
i bet if we had a draw,
id be the one laughin.
homie you aint nothin,
check the song,
mine as well compare,
to a b*tch ina thong,
hahahahaha like your mom,
now im only 15,
i dont give a straight f**k,
u may win this s**t,
but its the internet, how u gonna buck,
hard body muthafuka,
got a heart of a killa
young sniow in the building
bouta start a religion
bout to call Bin Laden up and order some missles
bring them straight to your block and go to war with you b*tches
if u hit the head been to rest fall in position
shoot gothy from on his porch and make him fall in his kitchen

www.myspace.com/yungsnow1

3:17 am
July 17, 2008


PK

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1867

Tallinn

5

i hav a feelin dat Gothy hit a mark wit “You were elected to be defective from the form of a fetus /”. tho I wont vote, u can guess, wat, 3 times ?

monkey see, monkey do

12:25 am
July 30, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

6

Gothy - 17
Multis - 2
Vocab - 3
Structure - 3
Personals - 4
Punches - 5

The only problem you have is you dont work enough Multis into your verses.
If you add a few more Multis here and there in your verse,You’d be set.
Your Personals and Punches were sick as f**k and they made me laugh.
Good job man,Keep it up.

Snow - 5
Multis - 1
Vocab - 1
Structure - 1
Personals - 1
Punches - 1

No offense but You need to work on your verses badly.
You need to stop rapping about murder and be more creative.
Your Structure is very weak and it should be more like this:
ima lyrical asasin,talk s**t about me,
youll be missin in action,f**k tha body,

and Not like:
ima lyrical asasin,
talk s**t about me,
youll be missin in action,
f**k tha body,

You would have gotten a 2 or 3 in Structure if you had it like that.
You need some better Vocab too dude,A lot of weak words in it.

Remeber:I aint dissing you,Just trying to help.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

1:54 am
July 30, 2008


Shadow

Posts: 5958

Somewhere near a bunch of beavers….

7

shoot gothy from on his porch and make him fall in his kitchen


how the f**k he gona fall in his kitchen if u shot him from his porch?…lol ima guess after getting shot he walked into his house got hungry n wanted to make a sandwhich…….

vote goes to gothy

i aint even gona bother with the breakdown

I don’t own Shadowville

4:25 am
July 30, 2008


PK

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1867

Tallinn

8

This b*tch says he’s killed for riches and loot /
I bet he couldn’t be hard if he had Iron Man’s suit /

hahahahahahahahahah. dats all i gotta say

monkey see, monkey do

5:04 am
July 30, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

9

Shadow said:

shoot gothy from on his porch and make him fall in his kitchen




how the f**k he gona fall in his kitchen if u shot him from his porch?…lol ima guess after getting shot he walked into his house got hungry n wanted to make a sandwhich…….


vote goes to gothy


i aint even gona bother with the breakdown


lol

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

5:42 am
July 30, 2008


PK

Shadowvillian

Posts: 1867

Tallinn

10

as i was sayin ! gothy wins it, go home ppl

my vote to him aswell

monkey see, monkey do