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HyoujinTheKing vs Josh Lynn

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4:56 pm
November 22, 2008


Josh Lynn

Underboss

Cape Girardeau, MO

posts 335

11

You damn right the sex is short, because I bust my nut and run
You're here to get me off, I'm not here for games and fun
Your battlin' gives diseases, your punchlines lack the knuckle
It's like your legs lack the knees and your belt lacks the buckle
I chuckle at your struggle cuz your lyrics are simply useless
Call me Mr. Denture, cuz my venture will leave you toothless
I'm seriously curious how you call yourself a rapper
I'm standing for my applause, and you're just another clapper
What you penetratin' with? Your lyrics just ain't for shit
My jeans are like Chelsea, they both can hold my dick
Put your record in the air, it lacks the weight so you can lift it
I got my flow for Christmas, so you can say that I've been gifted
I can't believe there's an emcee that still hangs around at fairs
And then has the balls to make believe that I'm the one who might be scared
How you gonna collect the votes when I literally made the system
When asked about your tracks I say I purposefully missed 'em

[I'll post the second 16 later]

9:49 pm
November 22, 2008


Josh Lynn

Underboss

Cape Girardeau, MO

posts 335

12

Alright, prepare yourself for a lyrical tongue lashing
This jokes and pranks are over, son I'm done laughing
You're asking me who's the king of o-hi-o?
Not hyoujin, he's the king of guys-who-blow
yes I know that simple lines are reserved for lil weezy
But how can I resist when victory is oh so easy?
It would please me to see who believes I won it with the first verse
I'm not bein' cocky, I'm just saying sometimes the truth hurts
Let me break it down for you, so that you might improve
I'll revise upon your lines so next time you might not lose
You say you're less fast than furious, and that might just be true
But if I'm 2fast 2 furious, then I'm twice the sequel then you
You said this cat was curious, but I couldn't hear it over the snores
Your listeners are bored, too busy readin' Curious George
A great big gorge separates your level from mine
I'm ridin' with the Horsemen while your kind are Left Behind*

 *[Horsemen: Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse
Left Behind: A post-Apocalyptic novel series chronicling those not taken to heaven or hell]

2:27 am
November 23, 2008


hyoujintheking

Underboss

Home Town Columbus.Ohio

posts 283

13

oh snap :D Josh nice verses lol time to put on some WD40 to get rid of my rust.


You bust your nut and run so your mom don't see her son//

Your the meaning of incest in this carnival of fun//

I'm not surprised that i'm a clapper thanks to your sister//

She had the clap on my arm when I fisted her//

Catastrophic chronologic events will lead to your demise//

With your lies my eyes open wide and reveal the demon inside//

Listen closely the only snores you heard were from me//

Your songs made people snore so much they developed nose bleeds//

I rap too fast that I could blow out one of my lungs//

But only Josh Lynn would lash other guys with his tounge//

They left me behind because I'm too evil and produce sequels//

The villian returning again and finally defeat you//

You wont survive anymore battles you lack the fitness//

Eventually your gonna fall apart like a shirt with a loose stitch//

As for Ohio man I definitely am the the king//

So bow down and thank me for beating you this Thanksgiving//


blah lol the wd40 was expired…


11:51 am
November 23, 2008


envoy

Street Thug

Upstate New York

posts 31

14

Josh Lynn-15

Punchlines-4

Structure-3

Multis-3

Vocabulary-3

Personals-2

Used great images within his rhymes and had some funny lines, loving your wordplay and the way your executing the syllables.  Keep it up man.

Hyoujintheking-10

Punchlines-2

structure-2

multis-2

vocabulary-2

personals-2

Started off strong bro in the 1st verse and lossed it in the 1st verse and then like said the 2nd verse was just missing that flare. Keep working and you'll be better.

8:50 pm
November 23, 2008


Spadez

Kingpin

Pennsylvania - USA

posts 587

15

Josh Lynn - 15
Multis - 3
Vocab - 3
Structure - 3
Personals - 2
Punches - 4

i know its the same as Envoy but i felt you did the same.not a lot of personals but a shit load of good punches.everything else was average.

Hyoujin - 11
Multis - 2
Vocab - 2
Structure - 2
Personals - 3
Punches - 2

again almost like Envoy's vote but felt you did the same except in personals.you had more personals then josh and i felt you deserved a 3 because of it.

2:17 am
December 5, 2008


alex_delarge

Kingpin

Betwixt & Between

posts 610

16

Josh Lynn-15

Punches-3

Structure-3

Multis-4

Vocab-3

Personals-2

Hyoujin-12

Punches-3

Structure-2

Multies-2

Vocab-3

Personals-2


Can I vote even though I'm in a tournament? lol.

 
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