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j-hicks vs. pink taco

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10:40 pm
March 26, 2008


illest wun

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 651

11

was ok i guess, needs work but keep tryin….try to focus on making the punchlines hit harder, and Slantize need to make the text box larger!

2:06 am
March 27, 2008


j-hicks2416

Journeyman

Posts: 64

12

i don’t know about this 16, i gave all i had for this one. pink is a tough one lol. idk maybe y’all think different. check it! 

 

 

right, i’m guilty of lyrical assasination, infatuated to leave ya sedated //
somebody check the shelf, cuz her rhymes sound outdated //
all this drama you cause, menopause is what you blame //
crampin’ up so bad, hunched over somethin like that dude from notre dame //

i’m startin to get at you cuz the lyrics you spit are one dimensional //
all you do is text-it-all, i ain’t bein’ subliminal to be intentional //
you remind me of shaq at the freethrow line, everytime i know you’ll miss //
i gave you free shots, must be a blonde cuz you ain’t get the gist //

tryin’ to go easy on ya, but that’s the part you play, you see //
this one hit wonder can’t find just a friend, like biz markie //
it was a joke, just to denote that it was just a hoax //
sounds like you were diggin’ HY at the time, (You) must’ve been givin’ him deepthroat //

the pain i’ma leave wit’ you is unbearable, it’s perpetual //
your just mad cuz your stuck down under and i’m on the next pedestal //
take it like a "trick" an show me how you work your magic //
cuz the only way you’ll win is if shady filled in your mad libs //

” you can’t blame me, for i’m the product that you made me. “

9:29 am
March 27, 2008


Pink Taco

Adept

Posts: 185

Eastern Canada

13

meh…..kinda weak

10:55 am
March 27, 2008


Lost_City

Disciple

Posts: 14

14

hahaha that last line is funny as hell tho

New Generation

11:33 am
March 27, 2008


Pink Taco

Adept

Posts: 185

Eastern Canada

15

ya i agree with that…the last line is funny…

6:07 pm
March 27, 2008


Pink Taco

Adept

Posts: 185

Eastern Canada

16

Cummon people lets get the votes rollin’!!

10:41 pm
March 27, 2008


Shadow

Posts: 5958

Somewhere near a bunch of beavers….

17

Pink Taco

structure - 4

punches - 4

vocab - 4

personals - 4

multies - 4

total - 20

 

J-Hicks

structure - 4

punches - 3

personals - 3

multies - 3

vocab - 3.5

total - 16.5

 

nice battle peoples

I don’t own Shadowville

11:12 pm
March 27, 2008


JaMiNo

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 836

ReiGNiNG TeXT-BaTTLe CHaMPioN

18

I know I said I was never gonna vote again, but hey - shouldn’t fall to the level of the wasters.

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Taco - 16
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Structure: 3
Multis: 1
Vocab: 4
Punches: 4
Personals: 4
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"Pink Taco is about to makes this "artist" draw a blank/

The s**t he spits stinks worse than s**t in a septic tank//"

Need I say more?  But hell, Taco.  Where were the multies?  I’m sorry, but Shadow’s on crack for givin you a 4.  There was only one in there.  Pretty much everything else was on point, but can the monosyllabic rhymes girl!

 

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J-Hicks - 15
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Structure: 3
Multis: 2
Vocab: 4
Punches: 3
Personals: 3
==============

First verse aight, couple of decent punches in there, but after Taco’s submission you really needed to bring it with your second.  Ya know, it started off pretty good, but it died out towards the end dawg.

"somebody check the shelf, cuz her rhymes sound outdated //"
This was a pretty tight punch and personal.

Work on the complexity of your rhymes and just hit a little harder with those punches.  Still, a long ways off TERRIBLE and you’re definately gettin’ better homie.  Keep at it man!

Taco takes my vote, but the lack of multies made this a dangerously close one.

HoT oN THe BeaTS… LiKe HeaRTBuRN!

11:14 am
March 28, 2008


Pink Taco

Adept

Posts: 185

Eastern Canada

19

more votes people

1:06 pm
March 28, 2008


j-hicks2416

Journeyman

Posts: 64

20

come on people, more votes…….

” you can’t blame me, for i’m the product that you made me. “