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8:58 pm January 30, 2008
| j-hicks2416
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who da f**k is this rookie named Redal, i ain’t ever heard of you //
well atleast you showed up to battle, in time for me to murder you //
hope you stay longer than the rest, these lyrics are like the lead //
i put you out like nyquil, now you layin upon your death bed //
i know why you signed up, cuz you thought you could try to rap //
i’m sorry, buddy your f**ked, might wanna try a cervical cap //
i ain’t even through wit you, gotta lot dissin’ to spew //
you ain’t got 50 to back you, like young buck do //
this is the last time you’ll wanna battle one of the best //
you don’t wanna come around, you’ll beg to be on house arrest //
even though this battle may be on the net //
the parental controls blocked this site, ya scared, why is ya crotch wet? //
this ain’t even a test, i done passed easily //
thanks for atleast givin’ it a try, you’re atleast reasoning //
now go on, you could use some tips on battlin’ //
i done shook ya, i can tell, it’s what i came to do, ya heads still rattlin’ //
i can’t wait to see what this dude posts on this…….
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” you can’t blame me, for i’m the product that you made me. “
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9:42 pm January 30, 2008
| ArsenousOxide
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The word for these 16 bars is so f**kin’ hot, it’ll burn my fingers if I type it!
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9:44 pm January 30, 2008
| boycott
Fresh Meat
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he doesnt really diss him… hes good.. homie u couldve done better…
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4:43 pm January 31, 2008
| kingofspadez
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I agree with Boycott,You didnt really diss him at all.Everything about your first verse sucked.I thought youd have better Vocab and Personals/Punches but i guess not.Take time to write your 2nd verse man,Come harder next time.
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Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist
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9:43 pm January 31, 2008
| j-hicks2416
Journeyman
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yea i only wrote it in like 25 minutes without really going over it. i’ll bring the heat if this dudes ever going to post…..
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” you can’t blame me, for i’m the product that you made me. “
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10:53 pm January 31, 2008
| kingofspadez
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1 Day left before you either Win by DQ or wait for him to post.
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Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist
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11:20 pm January 31, 2008
| j-hicks2416
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if the same s**t happens, wit this dude not going to post like he said he was…. i’ll be pissed. i haven’t got to have a real battle yet since i’ve been on here
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” you can’t blame me, for i’m the product that you made me. “
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12:56 am February 1, 2008
| ArsenousOxide
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J you got this s**t on lock, he gon’ lose!
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6:00 pm February 18, 2008
| Arab Soldier
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Like Arsenous said hicks, ya probably took this one. Well done bro, Redal you need to push him more. It’ll b interestin 2 c ya’ll nxt battles.
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