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j-hicks2416 vs. Redal

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8:58 pm
January 30, 2008


j-hicks2416

Journeyman

Posts: 64

1

who da f**k is this rookie named Redal, i ain’t ever heard of you //
well atleast you showed up to battle, in time for me to murder you //
hope you stay longer than the rest, these lyrics are like the lead //
i put you out like nyquil, now you layin upon your death bed //

i know why you signed up, cuz you thought you could try to rap //
i’m sorry, buddy your f**ked, might wanna try a cervical cap //
i ain’t even through wit you, gotta lot dissin’ to spew //
you ain’t got 50 to back you, like young buck do //

this is the last time you’ll wanna battle one of the best //
you don’t wanna come around, you’ll beg to be on house arrest //
even though this battle may be on the net //
the parental controls blocked this site, ya scared, why is ya crotch wet? //

this ain’t even a test, i done passed easily //
thanks for atleast givin’ it a try, you’re atleast reasoning //
now go on, you could use some tips on battlin’ //
i done shook ya, i can tell, it’s what i came to do, ya heads still rattlin’ //

 

 

 

i can’t wait to see what this dude posts on this…….

” you can’t blame me, for i’m the product that you made me. “


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9:42 pm
January 30, 2008


ArsenousOxide

Journeyman

Posts: 73

2

The word for these 16 bars is so f**kin’ hot, it’ll burn my fingers if I type it!

 

9:44 pm
January 30, 2008


boycott

Fresh Meat

Posts: 2

3

he doesnt really diss him… hes good.. homie u couldve done better…

D-RaP

4:43 pm
January 31, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

4

I agree with Boycott,You didnt really diss him at all.Everything about your first verse sucked.I thought youd have better Vocab and Personals/Punches but i guess not.Take time to write your 2nd verse man,Come harder next time.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

9:43 pm
January 31, 2008


j-hicks2416

Journeyman

Posts: 64

5

yea i only wrote it in like 25 minutes without really going over it. i’ll bring the heat if this dudes ever going to post…..

” you can’t blame me, for i’m the product that you made me. “

10:53 pm
January 31, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

6

1 Day left before you either Win by DQ or wait for him to post.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

11:20 pm
January 31, 2008


j-hicks2416

Journeyman

Posts: 64

7

if the same s**t happens, wit this dude not going to post like he said he was…. i’ll be pissed. i haven’t got to have a real battle yet since i’ve been on here

” you can’t blame me, for i’m the product that you made me. “

12:56 am
February 1, 2008


ArsenousOxide

Journeyman

Posts: 73

8

J you got this s**t on lock, he gon’ lose!

6:00 pm
February 18, 2008


Arab Soldier

Initiate

Posts: 28

9

Like Arsenous said hicks, ya probably took this one. Well done bro, Redal you need to push him more. It’ll b interestin 2 c ya’ll nxt battles.