Please note: These next two verses are MISTA SPADEZ’S verses.

Just another Featherweight trying to take my title
Jamino’s just pissed cause he didnt win Amercian Idol
The reason why..Cause he’s Simon Cowell’s bastard child
I see why he’s so pissed cause Jam is so riled

My rhymes cripple this fool like a paraplegic
He cant win this war,Cause he aint strategic
Trying to beat me,Man thats so ridiculous
Thinkin you the best,That you so meticulous

I’m like Jiggsaw from Saw,I’m puttin Jam to the test
I’m gettin so good,Even Strife said He’s Impressed
I pay close attention so they call me meticulous
I dont need to diss Jam,Even his name sounds ridiculous

Chance of defeating me is large just like a myriad
Just watch me everyone as i bring down this tyrant
If you watch TV then you wont see Jamino
He aint an American Idol,Hes workin at Dominos

A lyrical mirical,My rhymes come from within
Master of the game,Raps on the mic with a grin
No worries though cause nobody can top me
You cant stop me,All you can do is be cocky

Man ya skills aint nothin and thats the truth
Ya rhymes are whack,full of s**t and uncouth
I flow from the soul and my rhymes are great
You come into a battle all you do is contimplate

You cant shine or rhyme half the time,Not 1 decent line
Its all bulls**t So please resign,Actin like you divine
Im the king,So pass me the crown and step down
On shadowville in this section your renowned as a clown

Dont take it from me,Let the others decide
Im sure they’ll agree,That your rhymes will be denied
I’ll leave it at that,Im sure enough ill stump you
Vote for me people,This dude is just tryin to trump you

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No worries though cause nobody can top me
You cant stop me,All you can do is be cocky

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Fuckin hypocrite.

Jamino:

Multis-4

Vocab-5

Structure-5

Punches-4

Personals-4

I feel your verses could have been better, but I know you slacked off on this battle.  Still funny to read ha ha.  Good job.

Mista Spadez:

Multis-2

Vocab-3

Structure-3

Punches-3

Personals-2

Yes, you are getting better but you still have a far way to go.  Please, spend more time on your verses.  Try to make them the best you can possibly make them. 

Jamino-22

Mista Spadez-13

Jamino - 19
Structure - 4
Vocab - 5
Multis - 3
Punchlines - 4
Personals - 3

Jam - I’m glad to see your verse 2 lookin hotter than verse 1….There wasn’t any major differences, but it just seemed overall to hit him harder. Don’t really got any major criticisms….you put in your time and did a good job…

Spadez - 11
Structure - 3
Vocab - 3
Multis - 2
Punchlines - 2
Personals - 1

Spadez - I notice some improvement on vocab…BUT. A major key to having good vocab is not just using big words, but using them impressively!

"Chance of defeating me is large just like a myriad"

That was very simple, and it seemed like you just made that whole bar to use the word myriad. Moreover, that could’ve been worked off of in response (Even you yourself admit my chances are big). Shouldnt you have said his chances were small? Or you could’ve specifically said "Fat chance", but fat is the only word that means big that can be used in that way, if you say someone has a big chance of doing something, it means the opposite of fat chance…Anyways, im rambling here…

No nice multis, but I see some basic ones starting to form. Your multis still need alloot of work but  if you keep grindin youll get the hang of it.

Punchlines and personals went down low in this one. That was your major problem in this battle. You just failed to actually diss him.

myriad is pronounced — MEER-ree-uhd

It does not rhyme with tyrant.