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Jerzee -vs- Mista Spadez

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11:33 pm
February 1, 2008


Jerz

Initiate

Posts: 29

Newark

1

ABAB Format

My 16 will be up shortly

Most High!!!!!


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12:52 am
February 2, 2008


Jerz

Initiate

Posts: 29

Newark

2

How you gone not spell competion right, and be thinkin your lyrics ridiculous

Now Ill Yell stop your mission you wont be rippin this lyricist

Respectively we can be calm and collective rappers

Or next Tuesday, palm and aim Heclaz, Bastard

So lets start the preliminary assestment testing

Left sparked by the cemetery, with a blessing you’ll be resting

Oppose against these barz you automatically subject to scarz

ICU and the ER, this formula (USG) pa, you subject I GOD

I noticed how you begged for votes on the Phaze battle

You not potent, why would a girl be fazed and get AT YOU

Ha, like Duece Bigelow, Ill take your cheap hoe to Europe yo

Pipe then some coke and make her deep throat Pinocchio

It seems to me you went bar for bar in the battle with Opie

In the ring with me, pssha, you must be on dope b

You’d rather wait for the man to come down the chimney chief

And ask Santa for a haze lb. Christmas reef

 

Most High!!!!!

1:11 am
February 2, 2008


j-hicks2416

Journeyman

Posts: 64

3

not bad, not bad, but you could’ve done better, just got to see how Mista Spadez responds to this….. gonna be a good battle

” you can’t blame me, for i’m the product that you made me. “

1:35 am
February 2, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

4

You say you went light,Well my lyrics are heavy
Saw you in the streets and ran you over with my chevy
You see,Jerzee be the wanna-be emcee
I think he’s just mad he cant be like me

Man this dude lives double lifes likes he’s miley cyrus
Released an album,And f**ks people just so they can buy this
He was shootin for gold but it sold zero copies
Man this dude is so soft,That the ladies call him floppy

Watch me smoke this fool like KMK smoking weed
People addicted to this s**t its like their f**kin need
Just like your lyrics man we cant fix you
Your family hates you,So they wont miss you

Cant even spell Deuce right,Man are you illiterate?
Bitch why dont you go back to school you f**kin idiot
My lyrics are all-star players cause s**t they so great
So you think you can post in the "First 48"?

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

4:03 pm
February 2, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

5

ight well post man

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

11:23 pm
February 2, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

6

come on lol

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

11:55 pm
February 2, 2008


Jerz

Initiate

Posts: 29

Newark

7

Vocabulary, multis, personals, and punchlines

Structured, to puncture, these verses perfectly in crunch time

It’s a doobie with no pins, so call it a wrap

Son recites fictional s**t, no actual facts

Except the fact in actuality he’s actually whack

Accepts rats and casualties, PUSSY, he’s actually that

Logically you approaching me in the streets is a contradiction

Obviously YOU smoking because ya peeps not reminiscing

I’m in blacked down Dickies, b*tch with coke in her titties

Black lb. semi, strip yo b*tch down to her Vickies

Repetiously my skills are known for continuously killin creeps

Versatility is one of my many perfected abilities

And why shoot for gold records, I’m aiming for you necklace

Keep in perspective, REAL DUDES KNOW you not reckless

Aggressive behavior results to a penitentiary, the Mississippi, or misery

Professor Xavier will formidably investigate your mystery

Most High!!!!!

12:29 am
February 3, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

8

My 1st verse shook you so bad it sent you into depression
Meet you in the streets and my left hand made an impression
It took a while to post i know im giving you stress
Im serverin this verse to ya face in 30 minutes or less

He says he’s shootin for me but he’s only got blanks
Bring this dude to the mile like my name was Tom Hanks
Really did you diss me? Cause im lookin to see
Man i diss you so bad i make you weak in the knee

You may be wearin d**kies but you’ve never been laid
Man i think you must be crazy if you messin with spadez
I know you scared man i just want you to listen
Make a list of your fears and im number 1 on the list son

Im may be black as night but i shine like the stars
Mista Spadez about to out you for who you really are
You cant see me man so you call me the shadow man
You need a 3rd verse to win but its the end of the battle man

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

12:38 am
February 3, 2008


Skitzadawg

Fresh Meat

Posts: 2

skitzadawg

9

Jerzee - 14
Vocab - 4
Multis - 2
Personals - 3
Structure - 2
Punches - 3
 
Spadez - 16
Vocab - 3
Multis - 2
Personals - 4
Structure - 4
Punches - 3

12:49 am
February 3, 2008


Shadow

Posts: 5957

Somewhere near a bunch of beavers….

10

Jerzee - 17
Vocab - 4
Multis - 4
Personals - 3
Structure - 3
Punches - 3 

ur structure could be much better, but it was still clear for me to read so i gave a standard 3
 
Spadez - 14
Vocab - 3
Multis - 2
Personals - 2
Structure - 4
Punches - 3

gettin betr

 

jerz got my vote

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