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- Well first things first, plain and simple, b*tch f**k ya…
- I know some easy sluts, who with out a doubt wont f**k ya…
- Step ya weight up b*tch, u like a cake, man u soft…
- U like a f**kin d**k, right after it’s been jacked off…
- Lil flash that’s me, got a problem b*tch solve it…
- Cause Ima do me, no matter how a b*tch call it…
- U a d**k rider but I aint lettin’ u touch mine…
- Pistol whip yo b*tch ass and bust a cap wit a 9…
- U a b*tch, u a snake, u just lurkin 2 get me…
- Send guns with Santa Claus and I’m climbin down in ya chimney…
- U gon spit about s**t u heard or prolly sum s**t u seen…
- But I spit bout what I live u spit about what u dream
- Man u a trip, the fans love what lil flash b spittin’…
- u think u lucked up? but u f**ked up!! no competition
- Im done b*tch f**k it, get this nigga a hearse…
- N when I’m done i don’t want none of my s**t in ya verse!!
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FUCK DIS IF HE WAS READY HE WOULD GO 1ST
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12:10 am
February 2, 2008
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ArsenousOxide
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This verse is tight, but I gotta see what Treezy brings to the table.
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1:29 am
February 2, 2008
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Jerz
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yo it was straight, but u got more in u
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1:55 am
February 2, 2008
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kingofspadez
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Structure was good man it flowed nice.Vocab was so amatuer though,You say your good but that vocab just proved you dont have a big vocabulary and dont know a lot of s**t lol.I was like that in the begining rapping about murder,guns,and gay jokes.But im not like that anymore,Experiance on this site well defiently help you out with that,These dudes know what they talking about.
Why dont you try to get some better Jokes and Personals in there,Cause your jokes and personals were really weak.
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Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist 
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2:13 am
February 2, 2008
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ArsenousOxide
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Spadez dont criticise his stuff, he’s only 13, he has a lot to learn yet, along with I and every other artist.
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2:44 am
February 2, 2008
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Deviant
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spadez and arsenous are becoming coaches for rising emcees..
never thought i’d see the day.
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FUCK DIS IF HE WAS READY HE WOULD GO 1ST
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12:52 pm
February 2, 2008
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kingofspadez
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ArsenousOxide said:
Spadez dont criticise his stuff, he’s only 13, he has a lot to learn yet, along with I and every other artist.
Im not saying his s**t sucks im just saying where he needs improvement.I know me,you,and a lot of other people on here still need improvement but Criticism and imput from other rappers will help you.It helped me to hear what yall think of my s**t and ive gotten better from it.
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Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist
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1:51 pm
February 2, 2008
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king cobra
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I hate to say it, but Spadez is right….and he wasn’t dissin him or anything, just giving him advice.
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4:29 pm
February 2, 2008
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Ja-Taa the Misfit
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Maybe some of the best "advice" Lil Flash is gonna get on this battle is when Treezy drops his verse and shows him how to come correct. Now I just hope Tim doesn’t slack and bring something half-assed… keep ur game tight Treez and take Flash to school!
Good luck to both emcees.
Peace
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Electric arcs streak to restart ur deceased heart beat / That’s when I pull back the starched sheet so I can feast on the dark meat
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