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9:56 pm
February 15, 2008
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Holla-Tips
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damn, i dint know u posted another s**tty verse, aight ill put mine up tomorrow
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11:04 pm
February 15, 2008
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kingofspadez
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Holla Tips won this hands down.
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Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist 
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11:43 pm
February 15, 2008
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ArsenousOxide
Journeyman
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Holla-Tips got this s**t…
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2:17 am
February 16, 2008
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Barker
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Holla-Tips said:
damn, i dint know u posted another s**tty verse, aight ill put mine up tomorrow
LOL.
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“got the game hemmed up… like a sewin’ machine..” -Em
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12:06 pm
February 16, 2008
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Holla-Tips
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your first verse was s**t, thought that was in the past son.
but your second verse was EXACTLY the same as ur last one
honestly, i dint expect much mo from a guy called linn,
this reminds me of kc n hyoujin, yeah a 3 - 0 win.
mr. erwin you sound like a high school teacher,
holla-tips aint gotta even try hard to beat ya,
damn, in yo last verse you said attenttion twice,
you need to maybe even go to spadez to get advice,
you know we doin it like lupe, yeah im a superstar,
do it like hyoujin in his warm up game, on the tenth bar!
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12:06 pm
February 16, 2008
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Holla-Tips
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lol, 10 bars, n im still confident
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12:07 pm
February 16, 2008
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Holla-Tips
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true tho right, he said almost exactly the same words as his first s**tty verse
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12:15 pm
February 16, 2008
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Snow
Journeyman
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yh lol.
linn erwin:
multis-1
structure-2
personals- 2
punches-0 (lol honestly, step it up man)
Vocab- 1
total- 6 (lol)
Holla-Tips-
multis- 3.5 (not bad)
sttructure- 2
personals-4.5
punches-3
vocab-3
total- 16
honestly linn, you too fake, you need to read a dicionary or summin to step up ur vocab, and start readin shakespeare or summin to step up yo rhymin, no offence but u were s**t dawg.
Holla-Tips, not bad, i liked ur punches, the slit yo throat one was the best, i liked the way you turn his s**tty lyrics on him, nice!, but u gotta step up ur structure homie. but u did it, comfortable win i expect.
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Snow - Ice Cold Mixtape Out Soon!
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12:19 pm
February 16, 2008
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Holla-Tips
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aight, thanks man, i try step up my structure next time.
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12:50 pm
February 16, 2008
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kingofspadez
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Linn Erwin - 5
Multis - 1
Vocab - 1
Structure - 1
Personals - 1
Punches - 1
You are the worst Shadowville Text Battler i have ever seen.Everything about your verses sucked.No Multis,Crappy Vocab,Hard To Read,No Personals,No Creative Punches.
Holla Tips - 13
Multis - 2
Vocab - 3
Structure - 2
Personals - 3
Punches - 3
Your 2nd verse really upped your score.Your Multis and Structure still need some work.Your Vocab,Personals,and Punches got better.
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Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist
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