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Liquid Smoke VS Dem0neyes

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2:02 am
February 24, 2008


Liquid Smoke

Journeyman

Posts: 51

1

My first 16 - going ABAB

This is an introduction to your self destruction/
Have you choking like a throat obstruction/
I’m a hard hitter, like an old Philadelphia Flyer/
But always got innovative s**t just like McGyver/

With the fire I spit out this mic I will leave my brand/
I drop hot bombs so call me the a-bomb-abile snowman/
Have Dem0neyes saying "Liquid Smoke is so fly"/
"Omg I listen to him until my Ipod batteries die!"/

Liquid Smoke is mixed with Nitroglycerin and Strychnine/
Have you blown up by walking on this lyrical landmine/
Ripped apart, destroyed and dead in the first verse/
The insurance is me planting a car bomb in your hearse/

This demon was conjured, under control with my rhythm/
Bringing him through hell, taking is soul with this exorcism/
Twisting your neck so hard till I hear it snap and crack/
Just like the Terminater before I kill everything "I’ll be back!" 


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3:39 am
February 24, 2008


Dem0nEyes

Initiate

Posts: 42

2

-You either spit or choke, Liquid smoke, or get evaporated
-I spit it dope, in every quote, and dont exaggerate-it
-if your-my-rival, its highly likely that your suicidal
-my s**t is short and sweet, you’ll last as long movie-titles
-but either way its cool-yo, I sympathize with you-though,
-you ARE just like ‘nitro’, because you-blow
-I’ll admit that I was tipsy when you issued the challenge
-but you’re a push over, with a breeze you lose your balance
-I’m a hitman, who make-his-millions by slayin-his-victims
-business is good, I’m makin-a-livin’ by makin-a-killin’
-he’s busy tryin to rehearse, what he’ll say-in-his-verse
-askin if I’m finished, every minute, makin-it-worse
-He’s in a hurry to die, but there’s no reason-to-rush
-I’m so hot that I could turn liquid to steam-with-a-touch
-your like the main ingredient to makin wack-lyrics
-cuz all that the consumer has to do is add-liquid…

Midnight Movement….

4:29 am
February 24, 2008


Liquid Smoke

Journeyman

Posts: 51

3

You couldn’t spit if you were a virgin who hates swallowin/
Leave you with fat lips like chicks getting collagen/
I put you out of business Demon, leave you haunted/
So scared of my rhymes he’s got up a sign "Help Wanted"/

The rehearsal created a 360 reversal to steal the glory/
Because the title of this movie is The Never Ending Story/
You proved your point about makin wack lyrics and rhymes/
Check it, this b*tch had to add Liquid in his 3 f**king times/

I’m dropping data that could make your Pentium break/
And a d**k that could make a veteran lesbian straight/
Don’t push me cause if I had to pull the metal out I would/
Just tell me how you want your casket…metal or wood?

Make him bite the curb, stomp on his head, brains go splat/
Flatten your frame and use your body as a welcome mat/
So don’t waste anymore of your time and try to test me/
Or you’ll have 2 Nines on your chest just like Gretzky!

5:22 am
February 24, 2008


Dem0nEyes

Initiate

Posts: 42

4

-if you find it hard to swallow that I speak-dope
-you better learn to deep-throat, I lace tracks with each-quote
-you aint phasin me with idle gun threats, you’re not-a-thug
-you’re losin lots-of-blood, cuz the bombs your drop-are-duds
-I’m leavin you punch drunk like you chuggin a six-pack
-your s**ts-wack, who’d wait for this terminator to get-back?
-when push comes to shove, you aint gonna pull-s**t
-for the data that you drop, you’re gonna ‘mega-byte’ (bite) the bull-et
-in the chat you say you’re crap, in you’re rap, you’re high and mighty
-its a fact, that I seen stronger punches made by Hi-C!
-Poor Liq’, all that he comes up with is just boring-s**t
-shoulda chose to forfeit-quick, now I gotta pour-some-Liq
-what a waste of time, shoulda charged you like cell-minutes
-I’ll point out your ’short comings’ like adult film-critics
-my verses kill-liquids’, beware the midnight movement
-I’d reduce you to nothing, but for you thats an improvement

Midnight Movement….

5:47 am
February 24, 2008


Liquid Smoke

Journeyman

Posts: 51

5

For the time we agreed to do this in, we did it man, good f**king battle dog, props

7:48 am
February 24, 2008


king cobra

Posts: 2754

6

Voting is now open!

 Please note that this battle took place in exactly 3 hours and 20 minutes TOTAL. Good job guys!

9:13 pm
February 24, 2008


Dezi

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 4044

Digital Velocity

7

liquid= 16

multis= 3

structure= 4

punches= 3

personals= 3

vocab= 3

 

demon= 20

multis= 5

structure= 4

punches= 4

personals= 4

vocab= 4

9:20 pm
February 24, 2008


JaMiNo

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 836

ReiGNiNG TeXT-BaTTLe CHaMPioN

8

Liquid - 13
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Structure: 4
Multis: 2
Vocab: 2
Punches: 2
Personals: 3

Not utterly TERRIBLE, but you have a lot to work on homie.  Structure was nice and easy to read.  Were a couple of real basic multis in there, but nothing amazing.  Multis make a verse far more professional, so brush up on this.  Vocab was basic, and some of the more advanced terminology was used incorrectly.  "Insurance", for example, should have been "Assurance" if that line was to make any sense.  Punches confused me most of the time.  The snowman line, for instance, surely the bombs would be cold then?  I’m not sure.  I see you’re working on word play, but make sure the stuff you use is clear, otherwise it’s has the opposite effect to what you intended.  Personals were o.k. and far better than most battlers up in here nowadays.  Overall, not nearly as bad as you think it is.  Keep working on it homie.

Demon - 18
———————————–

Structure: 4
Multis: 4
Vocab: 3
Punches: 4
Personals: 3

Nice multis, they made you look like a vetaran in this battle.  Some funny punches in there, and decent personals.  Best lines:

-when push comes to shove, you aint gonna pull-s**t
-for the data that you drop, you’re gonna ‘mega-byte’ (bite) the bull-et
-in the chat you say you’re crap, in you’re rap, you’re high and mighty
-its a fact, that I seen stronger punches made by Hi-C!

-what a waste of time, shoulda charged you like cell-minutes
-I’ll point out your ’short comings’ like adult film-critics

Haha, nice.

Demon takes this.

HoT oN THe BeaTS… LiKe HeaRTBuRN!

9:28 pm
February 24, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

9

Liquid Smoke - 15
Multis - 2
Vocab - 3
Structure - 3
Personals - 3
Punches - 4

You barely had any Multis,You had some good Vocab,your Structure was better (Thanks To Me),Your Personals and Punches were pretty good man.That Ipod line had me laughing.Your getting better but you werent good enough to get this win.

Demon Eyez - 17
Multis - 4
Vocab - 3
Structure - 4
Personals - 3
Punches - 3

You had some good s**t man.Good use of Multis,It was easy to read.You had good Vocab,Personals,and Punches.You just took this.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

12:50 am
February 25, 2008


Ja-Taa the Misfit

Posts: 589

10

Wow… that was quick…

Dem0meyes picked up 3 votes.

Liquid Smoke received 0 votes.

Dem0neyes takes the win in this battle, 3 - 0!

 

Great stuff guys, ur battle is now closed and the scoreboard has been updated. 

 

Electric arcs streak to restart ur deceased heart beat / That’s when I pull back the starched sheet so I can feast on the dark meat