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11:45 pm
February 5, 2008
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Liquid Smoke
Journeyman
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Alright Vyce you will be my first
I will have to hypnotize the readers with my verse
You were the quickest to step up to me like you were the
answer
He didn’t realize he would have a better chance of battling
cancer
This s**t was over before it even begun
He be rappin and spittin like he’s William Hung
I am getting into your head with these lyrical streams,
I’m like Freddy Kruger and still be comin after you in your
dreams
We’re in a space where nobody can hear you scream
A place that lets me set the tone and theme
So don’t say some fake ass stuff and come out actin tough
You’ll be hooked up to them machines that sounds like trucks
backin up
So I had to say some s**t quick
Go over to your moms house and give her the d**k
So before I finish telling you to f**k off into the night
I will give you your verse with this mic
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12:21 am
February 6, 2008
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Vyce
Disciple
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Here goes my lame response:
You battle me and get slaughtered like cattle/
My lyrics boom and make the planet rattle/
Your lyrics weak like a kids sugar high/
Unnoticeable and definitely in short supply/
I bet you a country bumpkin with a backwards hat/
And that with a PC Mic you can make it in rap/
But infact your tactics are incredible flawed/
Aim to mutilate and cause utter shock and awe/
You must be southpaw cuz you ain’t spittin right/
I bet your flows terrible from the words you write/
And I asked my mom about the d**k you gave her/
She said she gets more pleasure bein a chronic masturbator/
The only Liquid Smoke will be comin’ out ya lungs/
Blood and gunsmoke stay affilliated with my shotgun/
Grip ya tongue, and rip it right out ya mouth hole/
Just step back and laugh when you choke from ya blood flow/
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12:45 am
February 6, 2008
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Vyce
Disciple
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Lamer 2nd 16:
Smoke so much like a b*tch he remindin me of females/
A cross dressin’ thug with pretty painted Lee nails/
He claimin’ rookie, yet he tryin’ to seem pro/
You couldn’t step up, cuz i’m tyson when I throw/
Retaliation is a must, So now I guess you f**ked/
Like the d**k in ya ass, you’re just plain stuck/
Impossible is your mission when it’s me you’re dissin/
They’ll find you laid out with some body parts missin/
I admit i’m rusty when it comes to battle tracks/
But when I tune up, i’ll get ill like the plagues back/
Face facts you couldn’t contend if I was crippled/
Your plain brain is dead, it’s just that simple/
I summon demons when I spit, the apocolypse is near/
Rip ya head off ya neck, an’ place it on a spear/
Conjure up spirits to notify the spirit above/
That Smoke committed suicide when he didn’t get any love/
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1:23 am
February 6, 2008
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Liquid Smoke
Journeyman
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Ok I’ve heard it all with the guns/
I knew that was comin before your verse even begun/
You are a genaric cookie cutter/
Rappin about the same s**t that too many people mutter/
Listen to you assume that I am a Country Bumpkin/
I haven’t even started yet and already made you a has been/
I am not southpawed but my style has to have you all shook/
Checkmate, it’s over, I got you cornerd and I am a Rook/
My flow is unparallel/
Matter of fact it’s uncomparable/
At first I thought your raps were histarical/
But then they became unbeareble/
So I have set this up and now you’ve been grilled and killed
Poor you had to be eatin up first by my skills/
So with that said take my advice/
Don’t waste your time rappin with this b*tch named Vyce/
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11:10 am
February 6, 2008
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Shadow
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| Posts: 5957 Somewhere near a bunch of beavers…. |
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Liquid Smoke - 14
structure 3
punches 3
vocab 2
personals 3
multies 3
you woulda had better points on structure had u done the style u did on ur last verse
Vyce - 15
structure 4
punches 3
vocab 2
personals 3
multies 3
lol he only got it cuz of structure
and vyce, have more confidence in yourself lol
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11:41 am
February 6, 2008
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Liquid Smoke
Journeyman
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Ya, I am trying to get a feel for the battles. Now I know what kind of style you want, I got a better grasp on this
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1:49 pm
February 6, 2008
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Vyce
Disciple
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Eh. I’m more of a story teller then a battle rapper. I admit though, i’m quite rusty at getting intricate with word play.
Haha.
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3:29 pm
February 6, 2008
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kingofspadez
Seasoned Veteran
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Liquid Smoke - 12
Multis - 2
Vocab - 3
Structure - 3
Personals - 2
Punches - 2
Structure and Vocab were good.Lacked Multis,Lacked Personals,Punches werent that creative.
Vyce - 14
Multis - 3
Vocab - 2
Structure - 3
Personals - 3
Punches - 3
Structure were good.Personals were good.Punches were kinda creative but nothing really just popped.Multis were ok and Vocab was average.Personals and Punches saved you on this battle.
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4:51 pm
February 6, 2008
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Liquid Smoke
Journeyman
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I hear ya Vyce. We just get baked and freestyle, I have never battled anybody before. That’s why I want to do some on this site and just get better. It is harder to come up with a good clever burn.
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7:26 pm
February 6, 2008
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djecko
Seasoned Veteran
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Liquid Smoke said:
I hear ya Vyce. We just get baked and freestyle, I have never battled anybody before. That’s why I want to do some on this site and just get better. It is harder to come up with a good clever burn.
true shyt lol….but hey ya 2 got some good shyt yo….props to both of ya….
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