WELLL, it wasn’t too shabby, I enjoyed both sides. But you both need to get creative with the punchlines. And smoke, your structure kinda killed off your vote, sorry homie.
DUDE have faith in yourself, I’ve heard you rap you’re a f**king nutty bastard, use the same sotry telling techniques to paint a picture of your opposition as a b*tch lol, you only won cuz your structure was good. Nice battle tho. Maybe you should battle me.. :O