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M.I.C VS PK

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11:45 am
July 31, 2008


Josh Lynn of Storm Squad

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Posts: 578

Cape Girardeau, MO

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:: m.i.c
3 :: Multis
4 :: Punchlines
2 :: Vocabulary
4 :: Personals
4 :: Structure
17 :: Total
You came hard both verses. You obviously did a little research on PK before the battle, and it shows. Every line was harsh in someway, and I respect that.
Ima Change “P’s’ Sound like Its Followed by “H”
Change “K’s” Sound Like Its Followed by “N”
I didn’t really get this, I might be stupid lol.
“PK I Told You In The Forums You Dont Want No Beef
Talkin About Madonna Cause She Just Dropped In Your Third World Country (Estonia?)”
These lines didn’t really click for me, if they rhyme, I don’t see it. I think you did a really good job, and you should continue to do text battles for practice to keep getting better. The only really criticsm I have for you is to increase your vocabulary and work on your multis. You can obviously do multis, you just need to implement them more. Keep up the good work.

:: p to the k
3 :: Multis
3 :: Punchlines
3:: Vocabulary
2:: Personals
3:: Structure
14 :: Total
Your second verse was a lot better than the first, as you had said. I think your lines are a little vague, and need to hit harder.
“this is it, IM THRU, ur more female than PT(Pink Taco) //
the guy is so weird i feel like im battlin ET //”
This was a good set. I would try and tend more toward pop-culture references like this in the future, just to flex that particular muscle. I would pay attention to your vowel sounds, as it seems to be a problem spot for you. Just like m.i.c did a little research, I would reccomend you doing the same in future battles, hitting your opponent at home makes a big difference. All in all you did a pretty good job, obviously improving. Keep up the good work, and keep battling.

http://www.myspace.com/joshlynn100

11:49 am
July 31, 2008


LoveLess

Adept

Posts: 202

NY

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P’s’ Sound like Its Followed by “H”
Change “K’s” Sound Like Its Followed by “N”

Example “PH”one -phone
Example “KN”ife -knife

Change The Sound Of P And K …w/e

www.Soundclick.com/DigitalVelocity “Drop Heavy Bars Like The Skiny Tryin Ta Weightlift” - Dezi

11:52 am
July 31, 2008


Josh Lynn of Storm Squad

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 578

Cape Girardeau, MO

23

lol yeah I got that much, but what would the end result be? PHKN? Fuckin? fk’n lol.

http://www.myspace.com/joshlynn100

11:56 am
July 31, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

24

dude Josh how do you give MIC 4 for Personals and Punches? All He said was PK was gay,He is a rookie,and He is a bad rapper.Everyone says that lol.Ill post my vote in a few.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

11:56 am
July 31, 2008


LoveLess

Adept

Posts: 202

NY

25

Just Word Play…….

www.Soundclick.com/DigitalVelocity “Drop Heavy Bars Like The Skiny Tryin Ta Weightlift” - Dezi

12:03 pm
July 31, 2008


rube

Adept

Posts: 176

Brooklyn

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mic’s first verse killed PK. Didn’t like the second at all because of the random bars that barely make sense if any at all.

Example:
P’s’ Sound like Its Followed by “H”
Change “K’s” Sound Like Its Followed by “N”

How on earth is that a punchline? Ohh that’s right you explained it..

“PH”one -phone
“KN”ife -knife

There we go.. a knife and phone, I never would’ve guessed.

Other than the randomess, mic won by like a point (only cause of the first verse). I thought of a tie but I doubt thats allowed.

mic you need to be consistant with your verses. PK is consistantly getting better. PK go for a rematch sometime later against him I got a good feeling if you keep it up.

12:05 pm
July 31, 2008


kingofspadez

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Posts: 560

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M.I.C - 10
Multis - 1
Vocab - 3
Structure - 2
Personals - 2
Punches - 2

You need to add some f**king Multis into Your verses dude,You are really hurting in it.
Your Structure on the first verse was bad but Your Structure on the 2nd verse gave you the extra point.
You gotta work on your Structure and make your s**t a little more read-able and flow-able.
You are good with your Vocab so stick with that s**t man,You had some decent s**t in your verses.
Your Personals and Punches were weak because You basically said PK is a rookie,A bad rapper,and he is gay.
Dude You need to be more Creative with Your Personals and Punches.

PK - 14
Multis - 1
Vocab - 3
Structure - 2
Personals - 4
Punches - 4

Like M.I.C,You need to add more Multis into Your verses because it really affects your score.
Your Structure was hurting on Your first verse but Your second verse kinda save you from getting a one.
Like M.I.C,You need to work on your Structure.Try and make Your Structure more like Your second verse.
Your Vocab,like M.I.C.,Was pretty good and there’s nothing bad to say about it.
Your Personals and Punches were f**king sick man and a lot of em had me laughing my ass off.
“beef ? BITCH, imma f**kin vegeterian wen it comes to meat like u” is my favorite line.

PS:Dont Be Offended By This.Im Just Telling You Where You Need To Improve.

And yeah what is up with that PH-one and KN-ife line? That didnt even make any sense dude lol.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

12:06 pm
July 31, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

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rubs said:

mic’s first verse killed PK. Didn’t like the second at all because of the random bars that barely make sense if any at all.


Example:
P’s’ Sound like Its Followed by “H”
Change “K’s” Sound Like Its Followed by “N”


How on earth is that a punchline? Ohh that’s right you explained it..


“PH”one -phone
“KN”ife -knife


There we go.. a knife and phone, I never would’ve guessed.


Other than the randomess, mic won by like a point (only cause of the first verse). I thought of a tie but I doubt thats allowed.


mic you need to be consistant with your verses. PK is consistantly getting better. PK go for a rematch sometime later against him I got a good feeling if you keep it up.


I dont think that M.I.C first verse even effected PK.It was better then his 2nd verse but it didnt have much of effect on PK,point-wise.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

12:19 pm
July 31, 2008


LoveLess

Adept

Posts: 202

NY

29

lol Knife And Phone Are Just Examples……

www.Soundclick.com/DigitalVelocity “Drop Heavy Bars Like The Skiny Tryin Ta Weightlift” - Dezi

12:47 pm
July 31, 2008


Wicked_01

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Posts: 195

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m.i.c said:

P Sounds Real Cocky, Like He Swallowed Some Base
Ima Change “P’s’ Sound like Its Followed by “H”
Change “K’s” Sound Like Its Followed by “N”
My lyrics Make You Sick Like You Swallowed My Pen! (Damn)
Your 16 Made No Sence, I Feel Dumber For Reading It
Talkin Shit Like You A Thug When You Aint Even Believein It
Ima Give You A Free Pass Now To Back Out This Battle
You Can Bow Out Gracefully And Always Live In My Shadow
Tryin To Fuck With Me? You Just A Stone Cold Rookie
Fuckin Discrace You Bitch Made Like Your Mothers Homemade Cookies
With Your Weak Shit And You Question My Thesis?
Jesus, I Heard Your Rap It Sounds Like You Suckin On Penis
PK I Told You In The Forums You Dont Want No Beef
Talkin About Madonna Cause She Just Dropped In Your Third World Country (Estonia?)
Your Shit Made No Sence My First Verse Deaded It
Before You Post Your Verse You Should Have Proof Read The Shit


(Who The Fuck Is Tina?)


M.I.C - 10
Multis - 2
Vocab - 2
Structure - 2
Personals - 2
Punches - 2

PK - 13
Multis - 2
Vocab - 3
Structure - 2
Personals - 3
Punches - 3

M.I.C’s second verse was kinda weak. If came consistent with his first one he woulda probably won. It just bored me