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Milkweed vs Josh.Lynn

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9:11 pm
August 5, 2008


milkweed

Capo

posts 157

11

Oh, is it finally my turn to burn and spurn your concocted lyrical verse/
And watch you back track on hacked tracks and throw it in reverse/
With no shame you claim “I am the best” I don’t mean to offend/
Your rhymes wouldn’t be the ‘illest’ if they had Herpes with HIV mixed in/
And with your ‘abstract acrobatics’, I’m gonna ‘flip you something real’/
Unless there’s a label called ‘Can’t Rap for Shit’ you’ll never get a record deal/
So after I alter your illusional delusion your mental I will enhance/
And you’ll be on my nuts like broke strippers during a dollar lap dance/
So you ‘lay fire lyrics’ for critics to critque but fail to make impressions/
Unless you endeavor to starve, maybe you should switch professions/
And I am a ‘flower’ that is empowered with a venomous verbal ‘pistil’/
That won’t hestitate to pollinate and distort your weak ass mental/
This pestilience that represents the plague that plagues your dome/
Has got you sitting, suckin on your thumb in the corner of your home/
So this verse dispersed i’m mentally spent, your dreams are now a wreck/
Put this ’suggested’ contestant back on the bus, I’m already yellin’ NEXT!!

12:20 am
August 6, 2008


babyrec

Kingpin

Eureka, California

posts 559

12

Milkweed better I noticed more punches and on the real i dont think josh can top that

9:57 am
August 6, 2008


Josh Lynn

Underboss

Cape Girardeau, MO

posts 335

13

Comin back with the attack but you don’t know how to act
You’re line’s are a waste of time, so you best go back to crack
Matter of fact, this is your first act, I’m bettin’ that you ghosted (writer)
Copy, pasted, posted, turned around and boasted
Makin’ allusions to delusions and how you’ll change my mental
Your mind can’t find the lines that keep slidin’ past my dental
You got your flower power “pistil” and don’t believe in peace?
Before your pollen is fallen I’ll insist you cease or be deceased
At the least it seems that readin’ dreams is a hobby you’ve acquired
But your addiction and subscription to reality has expired
You came to claim that all my tracks are hacked and broken
But I can’t hear your lyrics ‘cause they’re better typed than spoken
Keep hopin’ that CEO’s will watch your videos and put you on a deal
But your alias is scandalous and your lyrics ain’t for real
Lay me somethin’, play me somethin’, write me somethin’ down
Roll your soul into your gold but I’m still gon’ wear the crown

Vote.

10:55 am
August 6, 2008


PK

Kingpin

Estonia

posts 838

14

aigh, good battle boys

Milkweed - i wasnt feelin ur punches at all, idk wat was de matter, am i stupid (obviouslly) or u just didnt hav dem alot. but wat u lacked in punches u managed to make good on multies n personals n vocab. those 3 categories wer very good. now to giv u ur score:

multies - 4
personals - 3.5
vocab - 4.5
punches - 2.5
structure - 2.5

total - 17 (if i counted correct)

Josh - it seemed u didnt pay much attention to details wen u spat. meanin lines like de copypaste ones. u put a space between sayin “copy, pasted”. now wat u shud of said is “copypasted” or “copied, pasted”. see in dat way it makes more sence in de grammarpart. i thot ur first verse had funny stuff like de airplane line but ur second verse was more stabil n good. so heres ur score:

multies - 3
personals - 2.5
vocab - 3
punches - 3
structure - 4 (real good to read)

total - 15.5

good battle guys :)

11:14 pm
August 7, 2008


Josh Lynn

Underboss

Cape Girardeau, MO

posts 335

15

Is no one else going to vote? C’mon guys.

2:46 am
August 8, 2008


milkweed

Capo

posts 157

16

Where’s The Voter’s At!!!!!

Regardless, thanks for the battle Josh. Nice Work!!!

Appreciate the opportunity!

VOTE!!!!

4:59 am
August 8, 2008


M.I.C Aka LoveLess

Capo

NY

posts 182

17

MilkWeed
4 - Multis
3 - Punches
4 - Vocab
3 - Personals
4 - Structure
Total - 18

Josh.L
3 - Multis
3 - Punches
3 - Vocab
2 - Personals
4 - Structure
Total - 15

Good Battle To Both Of You, Milkweed Had A Better Flow And Vocab To Me….

4:14 am
August 10, 2008


milkweed

Capo

posts 157

18

Been gone the last couple days, figured this would have been voted on and closed out by now………….WHERE YA’LL AT?? VOTE!!

4:37 pm
August 11, 2008


milkweed

Capo

posts 157

19

Don’t mean to keep remindin……….but VOTE, VOTE, VOTE, VOTE, oh and by the way….VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

5:08 pm
August 11, 2008


agent orange

Capo

posts 167

20

And with your ‘abstract acrobatics’, I’m gonna ‘flip you something real’/
Unless there’s a label called ‘Can’t Rap for Shit’ you’ll never get a record deal/

very funny

 
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