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10:20 pm
May 25, 2009


da advocate

Foot Soldier

posts 54

21

yea ground force took dat shit

10:36 pm
May 25, 2009


Mayo

Underboss

posts 484

22

1-0 finally we got a dam vote on here haha need more peepss

Theres no such thing as innocent, not in me, ive been corrupted since i was an infant.

10:44 pm
May 25, 2009


AsylumSpadez

Shadowvillian

Pennsylvania - USA

posts 1355

23

CyLensir - 9 of 25
Vocab:2
Multis:4
Structure:1
Personals:1
Punches:1

I think if you really tried on your second 16 then you would have had a shot at beating him.You have 2 days to post after He does so take advantage of that.Really disapointed me cause it just seemed that your second 16 was a shitty diss to his first 16.If you wanna pick apart your oponent's lines then only do so for a few bars.

Groundforce - 11 of 25
Vocab:3
Multis:2
Structure:2
Personals:2
Punches:2

like CyLensir,your second 16 disapointed me as well.You really downplayed it,Remember even if you have the win in the bag the battle isnt over til its over.Your vocab was pretty solid.You need to add more then the simple “End Of The Line” multis.Structure was sort of like CyLensir's cause you flowed good for a bit then wrecked it at the end of the line.Personals and Punches were good in the first 16 but crashed in the second.

Both of you have potential to be good battlers,Yall just need some improvement.CyLensir i suggest you read a dictionary or something man lol,No offense but your vocab sucks.Groundforce,You need to add some more multis in your bars cause CyLensir wrecked you in multis.

Pink Pimps….RIZE UP!

10:50 pm
May 25, 2009


Mayo

Underboss

posts 484

24

thank you for the breakdown. very helpful

2-0

Theres no such thing as innocent, not in me, ive been corrupted since i was an infant.