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5:19 pm
January 22, 2008
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HIGH-DRO-GIN
Fresh Meat
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You in the audience and im the host/runnin ya mouth
will get ya put in a garbage can/like oscar the grouch
spades a sesame street g/he couldn’t see me
if i was on a big screen tv/playin in HD
make ya disappear like chris angle
u wouldn’t be on key,if you was a grand piano
I’m an animal?should be locked in a zoo
i was hustlin in these streets,when u were watching blues clues
but u don’t got one/cause if ya did you’d say i already won
spades as cold as Pluto I’m hot as the sun/P.S. say hi to ya moms
and how u gonna make a song,about hittin the pink
when u couldn’t get ya d**k wet/if it was caught in the sink
Im a slay u in less then a wink/rhymes strait money
just call me brinks/you endin up in the drink
where oysters make perils/consider ya self lucky
cause i usually don’t battle little girls
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6:02 pm
January 22, 2008
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kingofspadez
Seasoned Veteran
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If You rocking on the stage,Then why You droppin the mic?
You saw the King in the crowd and then you walked off right
Meet your ass backstage and as i beat you down
I whip the blood off the jewels from my pure gold crown
Its really funny to face the Reject of the 7 Dwarfs
Didnt cut it cause he’s unstable like a broken wharf
Damn You must suck if You gotta rip off Dopie
My lyricals are like bullets and they make the room smoky
Yeah i write about pussy something you dont get
Abusing your own hand why dont you get bent
He’s hot like the sun but i just put out his fire
Pretty soon youll be on ya knees callin me sire
If your rhymes were worth money then you’d fill bankrupcy
They aint worth a dime dude just trust me
You cant rhyme or even land on a solid note
Like a lost joint man you bout to get smoked
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Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist 
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7:06 pm
January 22, 2008
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HIGH-DRO-GIN
Fresh Meat
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its the last round/so i guess i lay u down for the count
like dracula’s people/introduce ya to religion
bury ya unda a steeple
if you the last man on earth i wouldn’t call ya sire
tell ya truth, i wouldn’t piss on ya if u were on fire
u a rat,some one check this girl for a wire
2 glocks 2 shots /spades got hit with the dub
thats the only way u gettin in .40 .40 club
u got celibate raps/not even are feelin ya self
this right here is unprotected text
and u just got f**ked with my fingers
i hope u just actin retarded like john knox in the ringer
by the way /tell ya boys you just lost to a beginner..
how ya gonna compare ya self to a king
with that many loses/thats like comparing a timex to rolex watches
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7:23 pm
January 22, 2008
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king cobra
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Mista Spadez said:
You saw the King in the crowd and then you walked off right
I wasn’t in the crowd….lol
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7:54 pm
January 22, 2008
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Dezi
Master Shadowvillian
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theres one thing i have a problem understanding… what stage? what mic? and you beat him down backstage? and cobra’s the king…
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8:07 pm
January 22, 2008
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kingofspadez
Seasoned Veteran
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You laid me down for the count but i got up by 1
He raises his hand in victory man you must be dumb
I shoot up and striked quick like my fist was on a slant
His lyrics aint rhymes they just pissed off rants
Man you aint original you just copied my lyrics
I already won cause of my strong satirics
You only posted 14 man go back to school
You off by 2 man dont be a fool
Cut off ya fingers cause your text is cursed
Shoot myself or read your lyrics? IDK whats worst
Please i need some closure i cant stand this guy
He stays up at night saying i wish he was mine
Best get out my way before i lose my temper
So much rage i melt you like you was made by distemper
Where’d he go? he evaperates in the sky
Put this baby to sleep so rock a bye bye
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Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist
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8:18 pm
January 22, 2008
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king cobra
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8:39 pm
January 22, 2008
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Dezi
Master Shadowvillian
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opie= 11
spadez= 11
so i voted and added up the scores and both came out to 11. im not gonna show how i scored each category. i will say i saw zero multis from both. to me obie’s verses stood out better to me with lines like…
when u couldn’t get ya d**k wet/if it was caught in the sink
u got celibate raps/not even are feelin ya self
with that many loses/thats like comparing a timex to rolex watches
but spadez did better in other categories and with the voting system it came out a tie (to me atleast)
sorry, good luck both of ya…
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9:22 pm
January 22, 2008
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JaMiNo
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Opie - 11
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Structure: 2
Multis: 1
Vocab: 3
Punches: 4
Personals: 1
Some nice punches in there homie, but they could be used versus anyone and the rest needs work. Structure was confusing, multis were absent, vocab was original but simple and the personals weren’t there - like I said, the whole verse didn’t really have anything to do with Spadez. Definately some decent material in there, but the premeditation and simplistic style restricts you from getting a higher score.
Spadez - 10
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Structure: 3
Multis: 1
Vocab: 2
Punches: 2
Personals: 2
Same s**t, different battle. Yeah, we told you that you’ve raised your game, but keep rising. Don’t stay where you are. Barely a slap in there, nevermind a punch. No multis, basic vocabulary and the structure was OK, but not amazing. The personals were stronger than Opie’s, because his lacked direction. Yours were on target, but the arrow-heads were suction-cups…
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HoT oN THe BeaTS… LiKe HeaRTBuRN!
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9:24 pm
January 22, 2008
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djecko
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iight this is my first time postin/voting hope it helps
Opie
1. Multis: 0
2. Punchlinesz:3
3. Vocabulary:4
4. Personals:3
5. Structure:1
Total 11
sorry bout the low scores bro but i didnt see any multis at all bro, and if there was it was really hard to tell cuz ur rhyming/writing was kinda hard to follow iight
Spadez
1. Multis: 0
2. Punchlinesz:2
3. Vocabulary:3
4. Personals:1
5. Structure:4
Total 10
Spadez…ive been readin da battles u have been in (and lost sorry to point it out) and this one aint that different…no multis, sum punchlines were good but some of them i didnt understand and especially this line
"He stays up at night saying i wish he was mine"
Kinda freaked me out a lil lol….personals i wasnt really feelin da disses….i give u props for structure cuz ur flow was fine and easy….but not ur disses and everything else…. sorry
So my vote goes for Opie iight
Madd Respect
DJ EcKo
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