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10:58 am
September 16, 2008
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parallelrhymes
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I’ll have my verse up soon enough
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11:32 am
September 16, 2008
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parallelrhymes
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I’m bout to blow you up, like your screenname en-titles//
And leave you washed up, like i freestyle in-tidals//
So bring your surf board, cuz i’m a killer dude//
And no pun intended, i’m really killer true//
Don’t fuck with me man, i hit hard like a gavel//
And extend your life sentence with every bar in this battle//
So order in the court, i defuse explosions just for sport//
And leave your skull cracked up, with these lines that i snort//
Your rap life’s ended, you should try-rockin-sir//
Nicknamed your girl “door” when i’m-knockin-her//
You can’t see my flow with bi-noc-ulars//
And i step on your verse like i’m high-toppin-verbs//
So lets come to a close and lets decide on a verdict//
The jury has agreed that your life times inverted//
And that I’ve got dirty money I’m as filthy as hard//
And for the crime of Suckin you are guilty as charged//
ok post your 2 verses…32 bars
*not to jock on myself but i like the flow of this one haha*
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12:51 pm
September 16, 2008
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Ex
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iight thats good but ill get mine up later i just got out of school
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4:33 pm
September 16, 2008
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he may call him self parallel but this kid aint straight//
i heard he banged two dudes on his last date//
he be gettin more action than his butt can take//
so ima just call this lyrical rape//
dont eva come across me ill drop u like a fuckin brick//
ill lyrically beat u down leave u cryin like a bitch//
u wish u could blow me up but i exploded a while back//
leavin craters where i stand because i may be lyrically jacked//
ill curb stomp ur face leave my name indented on your forhead//
coming back right at u reversin everything u sed//
so how can u be the so called killer dude//
if im the 1 who just ended up killin you?//
it wasnt my girl it was your mom just to let u no//
so u can keep her to uself cuz i aint need her no more//
so go snort your crack and think twice b4 writin shit//
cuz i aint ganna sit here and battle wt an emcee chick//
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4:33 pm
September 16, 2008
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Ex
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this kid that i am battlin dont no just what hes in for//
i Explode his hopes and dreams with some simalies and some metaphors//
u no ill just break your spinal cord ur into far way over your head//
u cant stand a chance against me man ur gone wind up dead//
im lyrically insane in the game talkin bout murder and violence//
and how im ganna wreck parallel rhymes without tryin//
call me your executioner cuz bitch ill just take your life//
im lyrically killin you with all of my fuckin rhymes//
like bullets through ur head u cant handle my fashion//
ill drop bombs on you kid like a lyrical assassin//
im like a suicide bomber ill go kamikaze on your ass//
ill take both are life with the bombs i got straped//
and the words that i rap cuz im just that deadly
im so quick with my actions u would neva even see
so afta i put my lines down and all together
ima let u burn in hell foreva and eva
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4:36 pm
September 16, 2008
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Ex
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this was my first battle so i think i did alright but i dont think i came that hot lol
but theres my 32
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5:48 pm
September 16, 2008
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parallelrhymes
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Dog i’m the champ as you see, so just hand me the belt//
How you talk about winning, with no confidence in yourself//
Do i need a second round, i’ll just copy paste what i wrote you//
You even said your shit wasn’t hot, should i cite this or quote you?//
And what’s with this new trend, on the shadowville site//
illiterate ass kids, talkin about holding mics//
Man I do drive bys, homie you still scootering//
Did you need this afterschool murder, nah you should have stayed for tutoring//
How you repp similies with only 2 in each verse//
Thats LIKE saying you’re gonna study without letting me teach first//
I’m crazy dog, i gladly welcome your trip to hell//
I pack a turtle neck, gym pants, and still not sweat your hollow shell//
Dog I send grass infuego with the fire i spit//
Leave your ass second place like diego with every step higher i get//
Cuz i’m taking off like NASA, i’m like Apollo-size//
And i’m sorry your first battle went like this, let me apolo-gize//
vote up people
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6:20 pm
September 16, 2008
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Ex
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nice 16 this was a pretty good battle for my first time i battled some1 who obviosuly has been doin it for a while i think but anyway i didnt back down lol
but ya like he said vote
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7:12 pm
September 16, 2008
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Cels
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“he be gettin more action than his butt can take, so ima just call this lyrical rape”-nice!
ExplosionX-11
Multis-1
Structure-3
Vocab-2
Punchlines-3
Personals-2
Parallel Rhymes-13
Multis-2
Structure-3
Vocab-2
Punchlines-3
Personals-3
Parallel wins! i still hate you but i can’t choose sides. i think explosionX did very good for his first battle and has a lot of potential. parallel did good in his second verse by delivering the personals. a tip: don’t show any signs of emotions or they will eat you up :)! and it seemed like explosionX kept saying “lyrical” every other line. keep ya head up. and parallel i’ll battle you soon, stay up my dude!
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8:40 pm
September 16, 2008
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Ex
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