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Pink Taco vs The States Son

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2:39 am
March 3, 2008


Ja-Taa the Misfit

Posts: 589

21

ok, that’s it… I’m votin on this one.  I was gonna save my vote for the Jam/Treez vs. Ecko/Barker battle, but since it’s already been closed, what the hell… this battle is well worth casting my vote.

 

Pink:

Punches - 4
Personals - 4
Vocab - 3
Multis - 2
Structure - 3

Total Score - 16

This score seemed a little low to me at first just because ur verses were bloody hilarious and often clever… but like Jam said, it’s not just about the punches and personals… even though they do tend to give the verse the bulk of its personality.  Your structure was easy enough to read, but some lines could’ve used more syllables, some less, some seemed incomplete…overall, not lousy, but not as smooth it could be.  Now multis I’m kinda touchy on… I love em, and I use them a lot, so i really look for them.  You did have some that stood out, but generally they were lacking, which tends to be the case with most verses I read.  The best one you had was "virgin cherry/were Jim Carey"…. the rest were fairly basic single-word rhymes…done well, but simple.  At any rate, you performed above average in this battle, especially for ur first attempt.  Big time props for bringin it right to States front (or back?!) door… well done.

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States:

Punches - 5
Personals - 3
Vocab - 4
Multis - 4
Structure - 4

Total Score - 20

When it comes down to it States, ur verse was just more well-rounded, more confident, and just generally more lyrically proficient.  I gave you the full 5 in punches because I really thought you earned it… if I used decimals I probably would’ve scored you a 4.5, but f**k it. I thought you delivered more than a 4… and definitely more than Jam’s 3 (don’t know what you were thinkin there Jam… no disrespect, but read it again man).  So ya, great job on the laugh factor.  Your personals were a bit skimpy, but since you barely know anything about Pink it’s understandable.  However, you did try and compensate by tossing in loads of jabs at her female pride, just as she did with ur male pride… and these count for something in my opinion as they are pretty damn personal.  Multis were all over the place in ur verses, and even though they weren’t tremendous displays of multi-syllable rhyming, they were skilled and fit together nicely with ur structure…which flowed smoothly.  All in all, you did a great job beating the s**t out of a girl!  haha!  Naw, but seriously, these were some high quality verses man… great stuff.

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Pink Taco: 16
State’s Son: 20

Excellent effort by both battlers.  Keep showin em how it’s done!

Electric arcs streak to restart ur deceased heart beat / That’s when I pull back the starched sheet so I can feast on the dark meat

12:08 pm
March 4, 2008


Pink Taco

Adept

Posts: 185

Eastern Canada

22

Common people we need to close this, lets get some more votes

1:06 pm
March 4, 2008


JaMiNo

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 836

ReiGNiNG TeXT-BaTTLe CHaMPioN

23

Ja-Taa the Misfit said:

and definitely more than Jam’s 3 (don’t know what you were thinkin there Jam… no disrespect, but read it again man). 



For real?  I put punches and personals the wrong way round… haha.  Damn. 

To reiterate:

States:
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Punches: 4
Personals: 3
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HoT oN THe BeaTS… LiKe HeaRTBuRN!

1:06 pm
March 4, 2008


JaMiNo

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 836

ReiGNiNG TeXT-BaTTLe CHaMPioN

24

Ja-Taa the Misfit said:

and definitely more than Jam’s 3 (don’t know what you were thinkin there Jam… no disrespect, but read it again man). 



For real?  I put punches and personals the wrong way round… haha.  Damn. 

To reiterate:

States:
===========
Punches: 4
Personals: 3
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HoT oN THe BeaTS… LiKe HeaRTBuRN!

7:05 pm
March 4, 2008


Slantize

Posts: 859

Brooklyn, NY

25

Wow I really had a nice laugh reading some of these lines. Good luck to both of you.

Art is the Ability to Control Other’s Emotions With Your Mind.

10:30 pm
March 4, 2008


Playboy

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 860

26

and people wonder why i don’t do more battles.  hmmmm, maybe cause it takes forever to get only 3 votes.  and it’s from the same guys.  you new guys want to battle, like to read battles, but don’t take the time to vote on battles.  I bet if I went and looked all of it up there is about 5 people that have battled one or more battles-yet have never voted.  f**kin re-d**k-u-lus!

-”Believe” mixtape now available for free download. http://www.zshare.net/download/53742630a00b5250-

10:51 pm
March 4, 2008


Mr Amazin AkA LimitLESS

Journeyman

Posts: 90

27

i vote for The States Son

10:57 pm
March 4, 2008


ArsenousOxide

Journeyman

Posts: 73

28

See IT ^ don’t fit i’m not flacid, but someone need to debo’ yo labido

THIS BITCH pussy lips reminds me of a bad seventies tuxedo

Taco or Gordito or Bo-rito does it really f**kin make a crap?

A mexican, or white "girl" THIS BITCH still can’t f**kin rap

I am astonished at these kids flockin to your side in mass heaps

I hate to tell you boys THIS "BITCH" hides "her" cock in "her" ass cheeks

 

 

 


That was the s**t!

2:37 am
March 5, 2008


Yuwie_101

Fresh Meat

Posts: 1

29

not bad pink taco..

7:33 am
March 5, 2008


Dezi

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 4044

Digital Velocity

30

States = 19

Punches - 4
Personals - 3
Vocab - 4
Multis - 4
Structure - 4

 

pinky= 16

Punches - 4
Personals - 4
Vocab - 3
Multis - 2
Structure - 3