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PK vs Prodd20991

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8:51 am
May 30, 2008


PK

Initiate

Posts: 46

1

good luck

 

thru the many faceless forums and the feeling thats within

comes this kid who says he’s all new and got rhymes that rip your skin

only vibe that earns a bill without using any fame

i dont know this cat at all so i must battle the name

empty up inside your mind like u dont know bout the game

stick to buildin up your talent like ur musics Frankenstein

pick up pieces that i make myself to build myself a world

battle slowly with some guys that you never even heard

only heat i pack with me is when these people call me cobra

i dont think your style is heat like you rappin with them polars

study up, my little scholar, im the sun like call me solar

i just drop these lines like every reader wants daily some more of

call me chorus like i make the song, i even make the beat cuz

on the streets they call me Timbaland or f**kin mister Beatnuts

be my Justin for the day and ill make ur ass a cake

s**tty rapper, stick to learnin cuz im sure ur ass cant bake


comin up


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9:07 am
May 30, 2008


P Rodd

Disciple

Posts: 17

Elk River MN

2

you i didnt come up here with rhymes to rip your skin, ima diis you so bad i just dont know where to begin, so you say you make beats and your beats are drop dead right, but you must not be that good cause you aint up on this website, so i kno what your thinkin that this whole rap is wack, but i kno you wrote that s**t how can you call that s**t a rap, im flowin of my head so real i wake the dead, and unless you do that then there not much more to be said, i aint no f**kin b*tch but i can bake and im a guy, this dish you should try is your moms pussy pie, dont eat it all i kno its a lot, but when i hit that right spot i make that cherry pop.

P Rodd

9:19 am
May 30, 2008


PK

Initiate

Posts: 46

3

ur a disease, u say, i didnt fukin read the remarks
ur a spellin disease, ill make u go to school with retards
so u can feel like the smartest, well atleast u tried and think
for a second there i bough it, but ur still the weakest link
read ur rhymes like a nursery, style must be cursed, you see
cuz all u do is flap around, ur probably the worst to me
you dont wake the dead, u dont even make them say "o word"
and the only cherry i pop is the one thats on ur girl
so dont try to overcome and dont try to climb this hill
when ur momma lickin stamps just to pay the f**kin bills
imma learn so dont come yappin bout ur lifely luxury
beat ghettostreet cat, rap my sooner wife to be
the only thing u talk about is my momma, f**kin nursery
or r u a stocker, u say rappin, i say lerkery
oh u soon clerk to be, workin 24
addin 7 to make better and u kno this s**t is score

comin up

9:32 am
May 30, 2008


P Rodd

Disciple

Posts: 17

Elk River MN

4

how the f**k are you gonna say that ima disease, b*tch please your family is full of std’s, see the way that i rap my mom wont have to pay a bill again, cause i will go do a show and come back with millions, i basically got it made all i need is a deal, unlike you your f**kin poor you’d suck d**k for a meal, i dont really kno you so i cant bust on your history, but step on my block today 2morrow you’ll be and unsolved mystery

P Rodd

3:16 pm
May 30, 2008


PK

Initiate

Posts: 46

5

i mean, we r done, let us kno, who won people

comin up

9:25 am
June 1, 2008


tankscraper

Journeyman

Posts: 84

6

Prodd, did you read the rules, and/or do you know what 16 lines is?  Not that big a deal, I guess, but your structure was weird dude.  I couldn’t get into the flow cuz of that.  However, when you said, "I can bake and I’m a guy", that’s funny s**t.  I can cook too, and girls love it.  Dudes who don’t know that need lessons.

PK             12

Multis         2

Punches      2

Vocab         3

Personals    2

Structure    3

prodd       11

Multis         3

Punches      2

Vocab         3

Personals     2

Sructure      1 

Nice close battle. If not for the structure, I think prodd could have won.

8:17 am
June 3, 2008


PK

Initiate

Posts: 46

7

plz vote sumone thanks

comin up

12:10 pm
June 3, 2008


Alex99

Journeyman

Posts: 64

8

PK

Structure-3

Multies-2

Vocab-2

Punches-2.5

Personals-2

Total-11.5

 

Prod

Structure-1

Multies-2

Vocab-2

Punches-3

Personals-2.5

Total-10.5

 

PK……work a bit more on Multies and also try to use a bit more wordplay

Prod……gotta work on that structure, it was very hard to read…..that really hurt u in this battle.

I make dem beetz

1:57 pm
June 3, 2008


Priest

Adept

Posts: 127

Kansas City

9

PK

Structure-3

Multies-2

Vocab-2

Punches-3

Personals-2

Total- 12

 

Prod

Structure-1

Multies-2

Vocab-2

Punches-3

Personals-2.5

Total-10.5

 

Both not bad, i think Prodd needs to work on structure, altho you did start to make a decient comeback at the begining your structure lost me down the lines.

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