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8:51 am
May 30, 2008
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PK
Street Thug
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good luck
thru the many faceless forums and the feeling thats within
comes this kid who says he’s all new and got rhymes that rip your skin
only vibe that earns a bill without using any fame
i dont know this cat at all so i must battle the name
empty up inside your mind like u dont know bout the game
stick to buildin up your talent like ur musics Frankenstein
pick up pieces that i make myself to build myself a world
battle slowly with some guys that you never even heard
only heat i pack with me is when these people call me cobra
i dont think your style is heat like you rappin with them polars
study up, my little scholar, im the sun like call me solar
i just drop these lines like every reader wants daily some more of
call me chorus like i make the song, i even make the beat cuz
on the streets they call me Timbaland or fuckin mister Beatnuts
be my Justin for the day and ill make ur ass a cake
shitty rapper, stick to learnin cuz im sure ur ass cant bake
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9:07 am
May 30, 2008
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prodd20991
Underling
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you i didnt come up here with rhymes to rip your skin, ima diis you so bad i just dont know where to begin, so you say you make beats and your beats are drop dead right, but you must not be that good cause you aint up on this website, so i kno what your thinkin that this whole rap is wack, but i kno you wrote that shit how can you call that shit a rap, im flowin of my head so real i wake the dead, and unless you do that then there not much more to be said, i aint no fuckin bitch but i can bake and im a guy, this dish you should try is your moms pussy pie, dont eat it all i kno its a lot, but when i hit that right spot i make that cherry pop.
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9:19 am
May 30, 2008
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PK
Street Thug
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ur a disease, u say, i didnt fukin read the remarks
ur a spellin disease, ill make u go to school with retards
so u can feel like the smartest, well atleast u tried and think
for a second there i bough it, but ur still the weakest link
read ur rhymes like a nursery, style must be cursed, you see
cuz all u do is flap around, ur probably the worst to me
you dont wake the dead, u dont even make them say "o word"
and the only cherry i pop is the one thats on ur girl
so dont try to overcome and dont try to climb this hill
when ur momma lickin stamps just to pay the fuckin bills
imma learn so dont come yappin bout ur lifely luxury
beat ghettostreet cat, rap my sooner wife to be
the only thing u talk about is my momma, fuckin nursery
or r u a stocker, u say rappin, i say lerkery
oh u soon clerk to be, workin 24
addin 7 to make better and u kno this shit is score
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9:32 am
May 30, 2008
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prodd20991
Underling
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how the fuck are you gonna say that ima disease, bitch please your family is full of std’s, see the way that i rap my mom wont have to pay a bill again, cause i will go do a show and come back with millions, i basically got it made all i need is a deal, unlike you your fuckin poor you’d suck dick for a meal, i dont really kno you so i cant bust on your history, but step on my block today 2morrow you’ll be and unsolved mystery
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3:16 pm
May 30, 2008
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PK
Street Thug
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i mean, we r done, let us kno, who won people
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9:25 am
June 1, 2008
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tankscraper
Foot Soldier
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Prodd, did you read the rules, and/or do you know what 16 lines is? Not that big a deal, I guess, but your structure was weird dude. I couldn’t get into the flow cuz of that. However, when you said, "I can bake and I’m a guy", that’s funny shit. I can cook too, and girls love it. Dudes who don’t know that need lessons.
PK 12
Multis 2
Punches 2
Vocab 3
Personals 2
Structure 3
prodd 11
Multis 3
Punches 2
Vocab 3
Personals 2
Sructure 1
Nice close battle. If not for the structure, I think prodd could have won.
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8:17 am
June 3, 2008
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PK
Street Thug
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12:10 pm
June 3, 2008
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Alex99
Foot Soldier
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PK
Structure-3
Multies-2
Vocab-2
Punches-2.5
Personals-2
Total-11.5
Prod
Structure-1
Multies-2
Vocab-2
Punches-3
Personals-2.5
Total-10.5
PK……work a bit more on Multies and also try to use a bit more wordplay
Prod……gotta work on that structure, it was very hard to read…..that really hurt u in this battle.
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PK
Structure-3
Multies-2
Vocab-2
Punches-3
Personals-2
Total- 12
Prod
Structure-1
Multies-2
Vocab-2
Punches-3
Personals-2.5
Total-10.5
Both not bad, i think Prodd needs to work on structure, altho you did start to make a decient comeback at the begining your structure lost me down the lines.
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