yo just get this battle closed.Its been over 2 days.Parallel is gone so PR could just take the DQ win.

rushed the hell outta it lol first time i checked the site PR my bad i had shit going on

I ain’t takin no DQ win nigga, I’ll just.. finish it up real quick.

I’ll indeed lay 16, to ya dome, long clips in the AK
Ya girl a hoe, blowin every Tom, Dick, and AJay!

I’m bout my straps, it get scary when I run up
You a funny cat, like you had Jerry runnin from ya

Why cross my path? Parallel Lines neva intersect
Leave wit the loss, Parallel Rhymes neva been a threat
Le’Ya leakin, you soft, I’ll smoke ya like a cigarette
Sleep witcha cross, my rhymes get around like the internet
Speak wit the boss? I’ll beatcha with’n a incha death

I’m quick to put the tools to ya forehead
Bomb ya whole block wit nuclear warheads
Leave niggas moppin up the spots where ya corpse bled

Torture is my method. You can die slow
Bet the desert eagle’ll make ya hit the high notes!
Have ya people runnin and screamin for the 5-0
You ain’t know I hold machine guns, I’ma desper-a-doe (desperado)

Parallel:11
Multies:2
Vocab:3
Structure:2
Punches:2
Personals:2

your vocab was good in the first 16 but the second 16 were kinda off.you had multies just not that much so try to add more.your structure was a hit n miss because you did good most lines but in some lines you just carried it on and fucked it up.you had personals and punches but they were weak ones but you did get a little creative in the second 16 so i had to give it you.you still need work on everything but you are getting there.you’re slowly getting better,just keep working on it.

PR:7
Multies:1
Vocab:2
Structure:2
Punches:1
Personals:1

you had little multies dude,you seriously need to work on your rhyming skills.your vocab and structure were weak but they were good in some parts.you had punches and personals but they were very very weak,you need to stop talking about killing and bombing the person and how you will give them a loss and do something more creative.

ajay tha kidd said:

I ain’t takin no DQ win nigga, I’ll just.. finish it up real quick.

I’ll indeed lay 16, to ya dome, long clips in the AK
Ya girl a hoe, blowin every Tom, Dick, and AJay!

I’m bout my straps, it get scary when I run up
You a funny cat, like you had Jerry runnin from ya

Why cross my path? Parallel Lines neva intersect
Leave wit the loss, Parallel Rhymes neva been a threat
Le’Ya leakin, you soft, I’ll smoke ya like a cigarette
Sleep witcha cross, my rhymes get around like the internet
Speak wit the boss? I’ll beatcha with’n a incha death

I’m quick to put the tools to ya forehead
Bomb ya whole block wit nuclear warheads
Leave niggas moppin up the spots where ya corpse bled

Torture is my method. You can die slow
Bet the desert eagle’ll make ya hit the high notes!
Have ya people runnin and screamin for the 5-0
You ain’t know I hold machine guns, I’ma desper-a-doe (desperado)

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nigga wtf are you talkin about?