ok so im not gona detail like jam…but is basicaly what he said

i did see some nice stuff tho keep practising

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Priest - 10
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Structure: 2
Vocab: 3
Multis: 2
Punches: 1
Personals: 2
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Neway - 10.5
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Structure: 3
Vocab: 2
Multies: 1.5
Punches: 2
Personals: 2
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Priest

Structure-2

Vocab-3

Multies-2

Punches-2

Personals-2

Total: 11

Your verses weren’t bad (aside from the structure, which was hard to follow at times) but you need to take more personal hits on your opponents. While you did make threats towards neway, you need to work on attacking him more directly as opposed to general attacks. I know this is your first battle as well, so try to improve (especially on structure! lol) and you’ll be fine.

Neway

Structure- 3.5

Vocab-2.5

Multies-1

Punches-2.5

Personals-2.5

Total-12

Your verses were easy to follow, and while your attacks on priest weren’t great they were recognizable. Also, some of your lyrics were basic, you should work on making them more complex.

Good luck to both of you in future battles and continue to improve your game!

Thanks Priest, Hope We Battle Again Some Day, Thanks For The Voting!