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Snow Vs. Abstrakt

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6:39 pm
February 17, 2008


Ja-Taa the Misfit

Posts: 589

11

Snow said:

yo rhino, that enough multis for u? lol


Snow:

the topic of multi’s and what they are exactly has come up a few times before on this site… in incredible detail in fact. But rather than rehash the whole thing all over again, let me keep it relatively simple… "multi’s" stands for multi-syllable rhymes. What you’ve done (ie.- meat, street, beat, heat, compete, cheat, etc.) is simply multiple instances of the same rhyme… and although there’s nothing wrong with that, it’s not what would be considered multi’s.

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Here’s an example of what constitutes a multi:

When we talkin bout multi’s, we mean consecutive rhyming syllables
Smooth and organized like executive diamond criminals
Sicker than sexual crimes in digital
Shown on projectors to hype the visuals

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See what I’m sayin? It’s about rhyming many words/syllables in a row, not just rhyming the same sound many times. It takes time and practice, but when you get the hang of it, it’s well worth it.

I eat multi’s for breakfast… and see how big and strong I am?

Keep practicing, and good luck with your battle man.

 

Peace

Electric arcs streak to restart ur deceased heart beat / That’s when I pull back the starched sheet so I can feast on the dark meat

6:52 pm
February 17, 2008


ッMock-Cッ

Shadowvillian

Posts: 2002

Home Town Columbus.Ohio

12

Abstrakt:12

Punches:3

Multis:2

Personals:3

Vocab:3

Structure: 1

 You really need to work on your structure overall it was a good battle tho.

SnowCake:10

Punches:2

Multis:2

Personals:2

Vocab:2

Structure: 2

I like the fact that you tried but you failed lol no offence but you seriously need to work on all the categories..

 

Great battle guys.. eh.. well.. Good battle guys lol 

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6:58 pm
February 17, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

13

Snow White - 9
Multis - 2
Vocab - 2
Structure - 2
Personals - 2
Punches - 1

I agree with Hyoujin.You tried but you failed.You had some Multis.Your Vocab was pretty amatuerish.Like what Rhino said Your Structure was good in the begining but it fell

apart.You had some Personals but they were weak.Your Punches were weak and were not creative.

Abstrakt - 11
Multis - 2
Vocab - 2
Structure - 1
Personals - 3
Punches - 3

You had a few Multis.Your Vocab still needs some work.Your Structure sucked,It was hard to read it and it didnt flow.Use Snow’s Structure for Example or do it like mine,4

Lines then a space.You had some good Personals in there.I liked your Punches then one about Bob Saget was funny.

Yall need to have some serious work on your lyrics.Snow is still bad even after a few battles.Abstrakt it may be your first but your getting there,You just need a little tweaking.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

12:57 pm
February 18, 2008


abstrakt

Initiate

Posts: 30

14

can somebody score this so we can get this battle over with and i can battle someone else

1:42 pm
February 18, 2008


Arab Soldier

Initiate

Posts: 28

15

Yo this a pretty gd battle, but both of ya’ll coulda came harda. Gd effort.

 

1:45 pm
February 18, 2008


kingofspadez

Seasoned Veteran

Posts: 560

16

this was actually a pretty crappy battle.

Spadez - Friend,Battler,Serial Rapist :)

1:51 pm
February 18, 2008


abstrakt

Initiate

Posts: 30

17

it’s my first dingbat

1:51 pm
February 18, 2008


abstrakt

Initiate

Posts: 30

18

it’s my first dingbat

8:15 am
February 19, 2008


Dezi

Master Shadowvillian

Posts: 4044

Digital Velocity

19

AB= 11

structure= 2

vocab= 2

punches= 3

multis= 2

personals= 2

 

snow= 10

structure= 2

vocab= 2

punches= 2

multis= 2

personals= 2

10:31 am
February 19, 2008


Shadow

Posts: 5957

Somewhere near a bunch of beavers….

20

Spadez said:

this was actually a pretty crappy battle.



u suck anyway sadez

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